列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "if I do a list" and improve sentence flow by using linking words such as "because" or "so". Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay within my budget and ensures I don't forget anything important when I go to the grocery store.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "I also deliver the things." Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently before the day ends.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more natural response.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously and enjoy the excitement of unplanned activities.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid repeating phrases like "sense of." Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better, although sometimes I use my phone for convenience.

× It gives me guidelines and for me it's efficient if I do a list before I shop and also focusing on my budget because I have prepared the list that I need to buy before going to the grocery store.

✓ It gives me guidelines and for me it's efficient if I make a list before I shop and also focus on my budget because I have prepared the list of things that I need to buy before going to the grocery store.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'focusing' should be 'focus' to maintain parallel structure with 'make'. Additionally, 'the list that I need to buy' is awkward; it should be 'the list of things that I need to buy' to clarify the object of the list.

× Yes, if I do a list of my things to do or the tasks that I need to do for the day, it is making my work easier and efficient because I'm focused on what are are the things that I needed to be to do before the day ends.

✓ Yes, if I make a list of my things to do or the tasks that I need to do for the day, it makes my work easier and more efficient because I'm focused on the things that I need to do before the day ends.

Again, 'do a list' should be 'make a list'. 'It is making' is better as 'it makes' for simple present tense. 'Efficient' should be 'more efficient' to compare. The phrase 'what are are the things that I needed to be to do' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'the things that I need to do' for clarity and correct tense.

× I think people do not make a list because they are into adventure. They make they they would like to have this spontaneous spontaneity in their lives.

✓ I think people do not make a list because they are into adventure. They would like to have spontaneity in their lives.

The phrase 'They make they they would like to have this spontaneous spontaneity' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'They would like to have spontaneity'. Also, 'spontaneous spontaneity' is redundant; 'spontaneity' alone suffices.

× I prefer to make a list on paper done my done digitally or in my phone first because it gives me the sense of sense of. Sense of.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than digitally or on my phone first because it gives me a sense of accomplishment.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Done my done digitally' is incorrect and confusing. The corrected sentence clarifies the preference and completes the thought with 'a sense of accomplishment' to explain the feeling derived from making a list on paper.