列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I do make a list when I shop. I do this to ensure that I remember all the stuff that needs to be bought. It also helps me to stay within a particularly defined budget so that I do not overspend and purchase unnecessary items. Also, it helps me keep myself organised.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
No, I generally do not prefer making lists for work. I feel it is very time consuming to 1st prepare lists and then head on to work. Instead I prefer just diving in straight and not wasting any time and finish off my goals as soon as possible.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Some people do not like making lists because they feel that they can easily remember stuff in their own head, uh, rather than writing it down. It makes their job more difficult and tedious, uh, when they have to prepare a list.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I usually prefer making lists on paper because I feel that when something is written down manually by hand, it always stays in our head and so I write it down and also the feeling of checking things off is very satisfying.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 85.0建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I do' and use more varied vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, 'Moreover' or 'In addition'.
範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. Moreover, it allows me to stick to a budget and avoid buying unnecessary things. In addition, it keeps me organised and saves time during shopping.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more formal vocabulary and linking words like 'because' or 'therefore'. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'diving in straight'.
範例: No, I generally do not prefer making lists for work because I find it time-consuming to prepare them. Therefore, I prefer to start working immediately to complete my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 70.0建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words such as 'because' and 'as a result' to make your answer more coherent.
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything mentally. As a result, they find preparing lists tedious and time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 80.0建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Avoid repeating similar ideas.
範例: I usually prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. Also, I find it satisfying to check off completed tasks.
文法
× I feel it is very time consuming to 1st prepare lists and then head on to work.
✓ I feel it is very time consuming to first prepare lists and then head on to work.
The phrase '1st' is an informal numeral abbreviation and should be written as 'first' in formal speech or writing for clarity and correctness.
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