列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I always', say 'I always take a list because it helps me remember what to buy and manage my budget effectively.'

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. Moreover, it helps me stick to my budget, so I don't overspend.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Use linking words to explain why making a list helps you. Also, avoid repetition and improve grammar for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete at work. This method works well because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important activities.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'you know' and improve grammar.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they are naturally punctual and organized. Therefore, they feel they don't need a list to manage their tasks effectively.

建議: Your answer needs clearer comparison and better grammar. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Avoid filler words and be more concise.

範例: In my opinion, making notes on my phone is more convenient because it saves time and is easy to access. However, writing on paper can be slower and less practical.

× And it also reminded me of my budget that which important thing I should be by or I should be able to.

✓ And it also reminds me of my budget about which important things I should buy or be able to buy.

The verb 'reminded' is incorrectly used in past tense here; the present tense 'reminds' fits better as the action is habitual. Also, 'should be by' is incorrect; it should be 'should buy'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So when I go to shopping, I always, I always take a list.

✓ So when I go shopping, I always take a list.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, the repeated 'I always' is redundant and removed for clarity.

× Yes, when I go to work I always try to make a list that what kind of activities I should do or shouldn't.

✓ Yes, when I go to work, I always try to make a list of what kind of activities I should do or shouldn't do.

The phrase 'make a list that what kind of activities' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of what kind of activities'. Also, 'shouldn't' needs to be followed by 'do' for completeness.

× So it works of course because it reminds me that I have to, I have to work in a proper maintenance and it helps me a lot.

✓ So it works, of course, because it reminds me that I have to work properly and it helps me a lot.

The phrase 'work in a proper maintenance' is incorrect; 'work properly' is the correct expression. Also, commas added for clarity.

× There have several group of people they don't like to make list because I think they're more punctual than than those people who like to make a list.

✓ There are several groups of people who don't like to make lists because I think they're more punctual than those who like to make lists.

'There have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'There are'. Also, 'group' should be plural 'groups' to match 'several'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency.

× And these people are very, you know, active on their work or activities.

✓ And these people are very, you know, active in their work or activities.

The correct preposition with 'active' is 'in', not 'on'. So 'active in their work' is correct.

× So I think this is the reasons that some people don't like to making a list.

✓ So I think this is the reason that some people don't like making a list.

'This is the reasons' is incorrect; it should be 'this is the reason' (singular). Also, 'don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'.

× From my own opinion, I think making note on phone is very suitable then making note on paper because of when we make a note in our phone then it take a little bit time and it was more, you know comfortable with us.

✓ In my opinion, I think making notes on the phone is more suitable than making notes on paper because when we make a note on our phone, it takes less time and is more comfortable for us.

'From my own opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'Making note on phone' should be 'making notes on the phone'. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'It take' should be 'it takes'. 'It was more comfortable with us' should be 'is more comfortable for us'.

× But on the other hand if we make note in paper it it takes lots of time.

✓ But on the other hand, if we make notes on paper, it takes a lot of time.

'Make note in paper' is incorrect; it should be 'make notes on paper'. Added commas for clarity. 'Lots of time' is acceptable but 'a lot of time' is more common.