列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la fluidité et la clarté en évitant les hésitations et en structurant mieux la phrase. Par exemple, évitez les mots comme "umm" et les phrases incomplètes ou confuses. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus cohérente.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, whether at the grocery store or the mall, to help me stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary items.

建議: Évitez les hésitations et améliorez la structure de la phrase. Clarifiez votre idée en expliquant pourquoi la méthode ne fonctionne pas bien pour vous. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list at the start of each day, but I often don't follow it strictly because I prefer to work instinctively, which sometimes leads to inefficiency.

建議: Améliorez la grammaire et la clarté. Utilisez des phrases plus simples et évitez les répétitions. Par exemple, reformulez pour exprimer clairement l'opinion avec des mots de liaison.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They feel confident in organizing their day without writing things down.

建議: Améliorez la concordance des temps et la fluidité. Utilisez des expressions plus naturelles et évitez les erreurs grammaticales comme "prefer" au lieu de "preferred" pour le passé.

範例: In the past, I preferred using a notebook for my daily to-do lists, but now, with advanced technology, I enjoy using a note app on my phone to keep track of my tasks.

× I love making lists when I shop at the grocery or even at the shopping mall to control my umm, shopping bag and but I always be attracted to other things so.

✓ I love making lists when I shop at the grocery or even at the shopping mall to control my umm, shopping bag but I am always attracted to other things.

The phrase 'I always be attracted' is incorrect because 'be' should be conjugated properly in the present continuous tense as 'am'. The correct form is 'I am always attracted'. Also, the conjunction 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed.

× Yes, I always make A to do list at the start of the day but umm I don't usually follow them so I just do all the things in the day with my instinct so it works bad for me.

✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list at the start of the day but umm I don't usually follow it so I just do all the things in the day with my instinct so it works badly for me.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'them' is incorrect because 'list' is singular; it should be 'it'. The phrase 'works bad' should be 'works badly' because 'badly' is the adverb modifying the verb 'works'.

× I think most people that don't like making lists is because of they think that it's a waste of time.

✓ I think most people that don't like making lists are because they think that it's a waste of time.

The subject 'most people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'because of they think' is incorrect; it should be 'because they think' without 'of'.

× They know how to organize a day effectively, so they don't need a list that they write down all the things that a waste of time.

✓ They know how to organize a day effectively, so they don't need a list where they write down all the things that are a waste of time.

The relative clause is incorrect. 'that they write down all the things that a waste of time' is unclear. It should be 'where they write down all the things that are a waste of time' to correctly relate the list to the things written down. Also, 'a waste' requires the verb 'are' for plural 'things'.

× In the past I prefer using a notebook to do A to do list for everyday, but nowadays when technology is really developed, I'd love to use a note app to write down all my things in a day.

✓ In the past I preferred using a notebook to do a to-do list every day, but nowadays when technology is really developed, I'd love to use a note app to write down all my things in a day.

The phrase 'In the past I prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the time reference. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens and lowercase 'a'. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common'; the correct phrase is 'every day' as two words meaning 'each day'.