列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'leash' thay vì 'list', 'budgets' nên là 'budget'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chọn từ chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể rút gọn để tránh lặp từ và tăng tính hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stick to my budget. For instance, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items and allows me to focus on what I really need. Also, it makes the shopping experience less stressful.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu bị ngắt quãng khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn cần luyện tập cách nói trôi chảy, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively. For example, by creating a list, I can complete my tasks on time and avoid last-minute stress before deadlines.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì đúng, cấu trúc câu chuẩn và từ vựng phù hợp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and they can remember everything they need. However, this can lead them to buy unnecessary items and feel more stressed.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'payroll' thay vì 'paper', 'lost' thay vì 'lose'). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và chọn từ đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer making a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can't forget the list at home. Also, paper lists can be easily lost while shopping.

× I usually make a leash when I go shopping because I think it helps me stay within my budgets.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because I think it helps me stay within my budget.

The word 'leash' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, 'budgets' should be singular 'budget' because it refers to the overall amount of money allocated for shopping, not multiple budgets.

× Yes, I frequently make a list for your for my work because I think it's helped me manage my time effectively.

✓ Yes, I frequently make a list for my work because I think it's helped me manage my time effectively.

The phrase 'for your for my work' is incorrect. The pronoun 'your' is unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× For example, I can if I create a. If I create a list, I can accomplish the work in time and avoid struggling with my deadline.

✓ For example, if I create a list, I can accomplish the work on time and avoid struggling with my deadline.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains an incomplete phrase 'I can if I create a.' It should be restructured to form a complete and clear sentence.

× I think some people is like making earliest because they think is a waste of time and they think that they can remember all thing they need to buy.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think it is a waste of time and they think that they can remember all the things they need to buy.

The verb 'is' should be 'don't' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. 'Making earliest' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'All thing' should be 'all the things' to be grammatically correct.

× But however I think they it's easier for they for them to buy something not necessary and is make them feel stressful more more.

✓ However, I think it's easier for them to buy unnecessary things and it makes them feel more stressed.

The phrase 'But however' is redundant; use either 'But' or 'However'. 'They it's' is incorrect; it should be 'it's'. 'For they for them' is incorrect; use 'for them'. 'Something not necessary' should be 'unnecessary things'. 'Is make them feel stressful more more' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes them feel more stressed'.

× Oh, I think I like making a list on my phone more because I think my phone can, uh, my phone is tangible and I, I usually bring it with me.

✓ Oh, I think I like making a list on my phone more because my phone is tangible and I usually bring it with me.

The phrase 'my phone can, uh,' is incomplete and unnecessary. The sentence should be simplified for clarity and correctness.

× So I, is it impossible to forget it at home.

✓ So, it is impossible for me to forget it at home.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct form uses 'it is impossible for me to forget it at home' to express the intended meaning.

× And I think if you make a list on payroll, you can lost it on the way you go to shopping.

✓ And I think if you make a list on paper, you can lose it on the way to shopping.

'Payroll' is incorrect; the correct word is 'paper'. 'Lost' should be 'lose' to match the present tense. 'On the way you go to shopping' should be 'on the way to shopping' or better 'on the way to go shopping'.