列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, because I think I am a forgetful person and making a list when shopping will remind me of the things I want to buy.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I usually make a weekly list for my work, but actually the real circumstance is not as the doesn't go as the plan plan.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Some people, they don't have the habit of making this, but it doesn't mean that they are not. They are not organized. Maybe they aren't just not used to it. They can plan things in their mind or something like that.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer making the list on my phone. I don't always bring my pen and my paper round me, so it's not quite practical for me to make plans on the paper, but I will always bring my iPhone so it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: 你的回答表达了原因，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强句子连贯性，并尝试丰富词汇。
範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things easily, so having a list helps me remember all the items I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并加入连接词使句子更自然。
範例: I usually make a weekly list for my work, but things often don't go as planned because unexpected tasks come up.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it, but that doesn't mean they are disorganized; they might prefer to plan things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答表达了偏好，但句子结尾不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I don't always carry a pen and paper, but I always have my iPhone with me, so it's more convenient.
文法
× I usually make a weekly list for my work, but actually the real circumstance is not as the doesn't go as the plan plan.
✓ I usually make a weekly list for my work, but actually the real circumstance does not go as planned.
句子中使用了错误的结构“doesn't go as the plan plan”，应改为“does not go as planned”，这里需要用过去分词形式作表语，表示“计划没有按预期进行”。这是过去分词用法错误（编号9）。
× Some people, they don't have the habit of making this, but it doesn't mean that they are not.
✓ Some people don't have the habit of making lists, but it doesn't mean that they are not organized.
句子中“Some people, they”重复使用主语，造成冗余，应去掉“they”。另外“making this”表达不清，应改为“making lists”。
× Maybe they aren't just not used to it.
✓ Maybe they are just not used to it.
句子中“aren't just not”结构混乱，应改为“are just not”，表示“他们只是还不习惯”。
× I prefer making the list on my phone. I don't always bring my pen and my paper round me, so it's not quite practical for me to make plans on the paper, but I will always bring my iPhone so it.
✓ I prefer making the list on my phone. I don't always bring my pen and paper with me, so it's not quite practical for me to make plans on paper, but I will always bring my iPhone, so I do.
“my paper round me”表达错误，应改为“paper with me”；“on the paper”应改为“on paper”；句尾“so it”不完整，应改为“so I do”。这些都是代词和固定搭配使用错误。
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