列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating 'specially' twice. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to add a bit more specific detail about how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when shopping for groceries because it helps me focus on essential items and avoid unnecessary purchases, so I can stick to my budget effectively.

建議: Your answer is informative but a bit unclear due to some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas with clear linking words and avoid repeating words. Also, be more specific about how the list helps you during your shift.

範例: Yes, as a nurse, I make a list of tasks to follow up with doctors and patients during my shift, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by providing a clearer explanation. Also, try to avoid repeating 'better' and add more specific reasons.

範例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they find that focusing carefully and listening attentively helps them remember tasks more effectively than writing them down.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammar mistakes and be more concise.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because, although it may seem outdated, it allows me to erase items easily and carry the list anywhere without worrying about losing my phone.

× Yes I do make a list specially when I shop for groceries because it makes me stick to what I really need.

✓ Yes I do make a list especially when I shop for groceries because it helps me stick to what I really need.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' which means 'particularly'. 'Specially' means 'for a special purpose' and is not appropriate in this context.

× Also it keeps me on track specially on my budget.

✓ Also it keeps me on track especially with my budget.

Again, 'specially' should be 'especially' to indicate emphasis. Also, the preposition 'on' is better replaced with 'with' when referring to 'budget' to express the idea of managing or controlling it.

× I work at a hospital and re endorsements, yes, I do make a list of the things that I need to follow up to our medical doctors to to our different patients.

✓ I work at a hospital and during endorsements, yes, I do make a list of the things that I need to follow up with our medical doctors for our different patients.

The phrase 're endorsements' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'during endorsements'. Also, 'follow up to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'follow up with'. The repeated 'to' is an error. The sentence structure is improved by clarifying these points.

× And yes, it works because it helps me keep track and remind me of the things that I need to do for that current shift.

✓ And yes, it works because it helps me keep track and reminds me of the things that I need to do for that current shift.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I actually work with someone who doesn't make a list during endorsements and I think it's not because she dislikes doing one, but she just works better when she's attentively listening which makes her work better.

✓ I actually work with someone who doesn't make a list during endorsements and I think it's not because she dislikes doing one, but she just works better when she listens attentively which makes her work better.

The phrase 'when she's attentively listening' is awkward; it is better to say 'when she listens attentively'. This corrects the verb form and improves clarity.

× I actually like making lists on a paper which I find to be outdated and less preferred by many, but for me it makes my work easier because I can erase things easily and also I can bring it anywhere without thinking my phone would get stolen.

✓ I actually like making lists on paper which I find to be outdated and less preferred by many, but for me it makes my work easier because I can erase things easily and also I can bring it anywhere without worrying that my phone might get stolen.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, 'without thinking my phone would get stolen' is better expressed as 'without worrying that my phone might get stolen' for clarity and correctness.