列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question. Use simple linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Sometimes, if I don't make a list, I forget important items. So, making a list keeps me organized and saves time.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. You should directly answer the question and explain how making a list helps your work. Use complete sentences and add supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. For example, when I have many tasks, the list reminds me what to do first, so I can finish my work on time.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly explain why some people dislike making lists. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use simple vocabulary and linking words to make your answer logical.

範例: I think some people do not like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to shop freely without planning, which makes the process more enjoyable for them.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. You should clearly state your preference and explain why. Use correct grammar and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer to make my shopping list on my phone because it is convenient and easy to save. Unlike paper lists, phone lists do not get lost or damaged, so I always have them with me.

× Yes, I make a list when I'm going to market in sometimes in sometimes I forget about that, forget about the shops.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the market, but sometimes I forget about it, forget about the shops.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes present continuous 'I'm going' with an unclear phrase 'in sometimes in sometimes'. The correct form is simple present 'I go' to express habitual action. Also, 'forget about that' should be 'forget about it' to refer correctly to the list.

× So I do make the list to get into market.

✓ So I do make a list before going to the market.

The phrase 'to get into market' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'before going to the market' to indicate purpose. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not previously specified.

× And nowadays, nowadays we talk, we talk to our friends in the road so we can get forget that.

✓ And nowadays, we talk to our friends on the road so we can forget about that.

The phrase 'get forget that' is incorrect; 'forget about that' is correct. Also, 'in the road' should be 'on the road' as the correct preposition for location on a surface is 'on'.

× Yes it's working but when I go into some list of my work it give me some.

✓ Yes, it works, but when I look at some lists of my work, it gives me some help.

'It's working' should be 'it works' to express habitual action. 'Go into some list' is incorrect; 'look at some lists' is appropriate. Also, 'it give me some' is incomplete and should be 'it gives me some help' or similar.

× I think that it is a not a smart work and it is seeing red so they do not make list when they go to the shop.

✓ I think that it is not smart work and it is frustrating, so they do not make a list when they go to the shop.

'A not a smart work' is incorrect; 'not smart work' is better. 'Seeing red' is an idiom meaning angry but is not appropriate here; 'frustrating' fits better. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'.

× Yes, I prefer on my list on my phone and it gives me more pleasure and the paper was so bad and I eat it does not in the phone it's saved in saving and.

✓ Yes, I prefer to keep my list on my phone because it gives me more pleasure. Paper lists are not good, and I don't like them. The phone saves the list securely.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. 'I prefer on my list on my phone' should be 'I prefer to keep my list on my phone'. 'The paper was so bad and I eat it does not in the phone' is unclear; corrected to express dislike for paper lists and preference for phone saving. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.