列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and effective by avoiding repetition and adding a brief reason. For example, you could say, "No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously."

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some hesitations and minor grammar errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "Yes, I usually make a list for work because it helps me avoid forgetting important tasks or people."

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for work because it helps me avoid forgetting important tasks or people.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and is a boring task."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and is a boring task.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear preference and explain why using linking words. For example, "I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to access and update anytime."

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to access and update anytime.

× Because some people don't like making lists be 'cause making waste have a long time.

✓ Because some people don't like making lists because making them wastes a lot of time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'making waste have a long time', which is ungrammatical. The verb 'waste' should be used in the present tense to agree with the subject 'making them', and the phrase should be 'wastes a lot of time' to express the idea clearly. Also, 'be 'cause' is informal and redundant; 'because' is sufficient.

× So it it it will be it maybe leads to waste the time.

✓ So it may lead to wasting time.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Maybe leads to waste the time' is incorrect; 'may lead to wasting time' is the correct form. 'Wasting' is the gerund form needed after 'lead to'. Also, 'the time' is unnecessary here; 'time' alone is sufficient.

× I prefer to make a list on the phone because if the if the list is in the form we can see it very easily.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone because if the list is in the form, we can see it very easily.

The phrase 'in the form' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions or vocabulary. It should be 'in the phone' or 'on the phone' or 'in the app' to clarify. However, since the original sentence is ambiguous, the correction keeps the structure but removes the repeated phrase 'if the'.

× And was another possible.

✓ And it is another possibility.

The original sentence 'And was another possible' is incomplete and lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'it' and uses the verb 'is' to form a complete sentence. 'Possible' is changed to the noun 'possibility' to fit the context.