列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, say "Yes, I often make a list of items when I go shopping." Also, use correct prepositions and articles.

範例: Yes, I often make a list of items when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

建議: Use present tense consistently and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, explain how making a list helps you. For example, "Yes, I usually make a list of my tasks because it helps me remember everything and manage my time effectively."

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of my tasks because it helps me remember everything and manage my time effectively.

建議: Avoid informal contractions like 'cause and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and believe they have a good memory."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and believe they have a good memory.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct expressions. Avoid unnecessary words. For example, "I like to make lists both on my phone and on paper because it depends on the situation and the task."

範例: I like to make lists both on my phone and on paper because it depends on the situation and the task I am doing.

× Yes, I often make the list of the items as well as or some of the things when I do shopping.

✓ Yes, I often make a list of the items as well as some of the things when I do shopping.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list' here. Since the list is not specific or previously mentioned, the indefinite article 'a' should be used instead. This is a common article error where 'the' is used instead of 'a' for non-specific nouns.

× Yes, I usually made a list of the work which I do because it helps me to remember whole of work and also see my time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the work which I do because it helps me to remember the whole work and also manage my time.

The verb 'made' is in past tense but the sentence context indicates a habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate. Also, 'whole of work' is incorrect; it should be 'the whole work'. Additionally, 'see my time' is unclear and corrected to 'manage my time' for clarity.

× Yes, I usually made a list of the work which I do because it helps me to remember whole of work and also see my time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the work which I do because it helps me to remember the whole work and also manage my time.

The phrase 'whole of work' is incorrect; it should be 'the whole work' with the definite article 'the' before 'whole work' to specify the entirety of the work.

× Well, in my opinion, people do not like to make the list of work they do 'cause they think it's a waste of time and moreover the thing that they have a good memory.

✓ Well, in my opinion, people do not like to make a list of the work they do because they think it's a waste of time and also believe that they have a good memory.

The conjunction 'moreover' is incorrectly used here; it should be replaced with 'also' or 'and also' to connect the ideas properly. Additionally, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not specific.

× Well, in my opinion, people do not like to make the list of work they do 'cause they think it's a waste of time and moreover the thing that they have a good memory.

✓ Well, in my opinion, people do not like to make a list of the work they do because they think it's a waste of time and also believe that they have a good memory.

The phrase 'the list of work' should be 'a list of the work' because the list is not specific. Also, 'the thing that they have a good memory' is awkward and corrected to 'believe that they have a good memory' for clarity.

× So that's why they will not like.

✓ So that's why they do not like it.

The sentence lacks an object pronoun after 'like'. The verb 'like' requires an object, so 'it' should be added to complete the sentence.

× Well, I like to make the list on phone as well as on the paper.

✓ Well, I like to make lists on my phone as well as on paper.

'The list' is incorrect here because it refers to lists in general, so plural 'lists' is better. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession, and 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as paper is uncountable here.

× Indeed be 'cause it depends on the situation that under which task I work at the place.

✓ Indeed, because it depends on the situation and the task I am working on at the place.

The phrase 'Indeed be 'cause' is incorrect; it should be 'Indeed, because'. Also, 'under which task I work at the place' is awkward and corrected to 'the task I am working on at the place' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× That's why it's very important for me to make the list as well as some of the materials on paper and phone.

✓ That's why it's very important for me to make lists as well as note some of the materials on paper and phone.

The phrase 'make the list' should be 'make lists' for general meaning. Also, 'some of the materials' is vague; 'note some of the materials' clarifies the action. Prepositions 'on paper and phone' are acceptable but 'on my phone' would be better for possession.