列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid slight redundancy like repeating 'shopping' twice in the first two sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, I prepare my grocery list by Friday evening before my usual Saturday shopping trip, which makes the process more efficient.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence. To improve, make sure to complete your thoughts and use proper sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to clarify your points.

範例: Staying organized is one of my greatest strengths at work. Therefore, I make a daily to-do list that includes tasks I need to complete and meetings I have scheduled. Additionally, I list people I need to contact or follow up with, which helps me manage my responsibilities effectively.

建議: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear phrases like 'I believe their force.' To improve, focus on clear sentence structure, correct grammar, and provide specific reasons with linking words to explain why some people avoid making lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it exhausting or feel forced to do so. Instead, they prefer to jump straight into their daily tasks. However, I believe that organizing tasks with a list is a more efficient way to manage everyday responsibilities.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like missing articles ('a big fan'). Adding a specific example would strengthen your response.

範例: I am a big fan of writing things down because it helps me memorize and organize my thoughts more clearly. Therefore, I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone, as it feels more natural and effective for me.

× Staying organized is one of my greatest strength at work.

✓ Staying organized is one of my greatest strengths at work.

The word 'strength' should be plural 'strengths' because it is preceded by 'one of my greatest', which requires a plural noun to indicate one among many strengths.

× Therefore, I do make a list of work and to do items for everyday.

✓ Therefore, I do make a list of work and to-do items for every day.

The phrase 'to do items' should be hyphenated as 'to-do items' to function as a compound adjective. Also, 'everyday' (an adjective meaning common) should be 'every day' (meaning each day) in this context.

× My to do items considers the work that I need to accomplish in a day, which also includes the list of meetings.

✓ My to-do items consider the work that I need to accomplish in a day, which also includes the list of meetings.

The subject 'to-do items' is plural, so the verb should be 'consider' instead of 'considers' to agree in number.

× The people that I want to reach out to or follow up helping me stay organized is.

✓ The people that I want to reach out to or follow up with help me stay organized.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb structure. Adding 'with' after 'follow up' and changing 'is' to 'help' corrects the sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× Making list can be exhausting and I believe their force.

✓ Making lists can be exhausting and I believe they're forced.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'Their force' is incorrect; it should be 'they're forced' (they are forced) or better phrased as 'I believe they are forced' to express the intended meaning.

× Few people might be avoiding making list and directly jumping onto their day-to-day task.

✓ Few people might be avoiding making lists and directly jumping onto their day-to-day tasks.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). Also, 'day-to-day task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'few people' and the context of multiple tasks.

× I believe organizing and making lists instead of jumping onto the task is more efficient way of handling the everyday task.

✓ I believe organizing and making lists instead of jumping onto the tasks is a more efficient way of handling everyday tasks.

'The task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the general meaning. Also, 'more efficient way' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Everyday task' should be plural 'everyday tasks'.

× I am big fan of writing down things.

✓ I am a big fan of writing down things.

The indefinite article 'a' is missing before 'big fan' which is necessary to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Therefore, I prefer making a list on paper rather than making list on phone.

✓ Therefore, I prefer making a list on paper rather than making a list on my phone.

'Making list' should be 'making a list' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession.