列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid informal language like 'yeah' and 'cause' and correct mistakes such as 'bite memory' to 'bad memory'. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then providing a reason with linking words.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. Since I have a poor memory, having a list ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Instead of 'obtain my success of work', say 'achieve success in my work'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my schedule effectively. As a result, I can achieve better success in completing my tasks.

建議: Avoid unclear phrases like 'it will W their time' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Provide clearer reasons with proper grammar.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes their time. Also, others have a good memory and are naturally organized, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

建議: Use complete sentences and correct grammar, such as 'I prefer using my phone because technology is advanced.' Also, avoid informal phrases like 'just now' and improve coherence with linking words.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because technology is very advanced, and I always have my phone with me. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I don't want to rely on my phone.

× Yeah, normally, yes, because this will help me memorize all the stuff that I need to buy 'cause I normally have a bite memory and every time I want to get back to buy that again.

✓ Yeah, normally, yes, because this will help me memorize all the stuff that I need to buy 'cause I normally have a bad memory and every time I want to get back to buy that again.

The phrase 'a bite memory' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'bad' to describe poor memory. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (Grammar Problem Type 13). Replacing 'bite' with 'bad' corrects the meaning and usage.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work. It will help me to organize my work schedule and obtain my. Success of work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work. It helps me organize my work schedule and achieve success in my work.

The original sentence 'obtain my. Success of work.' is fragmented and unclear, constituting a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type 26). The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Firstly, some people just don't have any hobby to make a list it will W their time and some people just have a good memory so they know what they're going to do. The pretty organized.

✓ Firstly, some people just don't have the habit of making a list because it wastes their time, and some people just have a good memory so they know what they're going to do. They're pretty organized.

The original sentence has pronoun misuse ('it will W their time') and unclear phrasing. 'W' seems to be a typo for 'waste'. Also, 'The pretty organized' should be 'They're pretty organized.' These are incorrect uses of pronouns and sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Types 12 and 26). The correction clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× I would prefer a phone just now, guess that technology is pretty advanced and if I go somewhere I just checking my phone.

✓ I would prefer a phone just now, I guess that technology is pretty advanced and if I go somewhere I just check my phone.

The phrase 'I just checking my phone' incorrectly uses the verb + -ing form without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I just check my phone.' This is a verb + -ing form error (Grammar Problem Type 8). The correction uses the simple present tense appropriately.

× But sometimes I do not take the paper stuff all the time.

✓ But sometimes I do not take paper stuff all the time.

The phrase 'the paper stuff' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' with an uncountable or general noun. Removing 'the' corrects the usage. This is an article error (Grammar Problem Type 22) and incorrect use of pronouns/articles. The correction improves naturalness and grammatical correctness.