列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and filler words to make your answer more natural and concise. Also, correct minor grammatical errors and clarify your points for better coherence.

範例: Usually, I don't make a shopping list because I prefer to decide what to buy spontaneously. It really depends on my mood at the time.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and express your reasons more clearly.

範例: I don't make lists for work because I feel they limit my actions and mood. Therefore, I prefer to stay as flexible as possible throughout the day.

建議: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid unclear words and phrases, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their actions and moods. Staying flexible during the day can help them feel more relaxed and comfortable.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, combine related ideas to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because paper takes up extra space in my bag, whereas my phone is compact and easy to carry.

× Usually I don't make a list because I don't really like making one.

✓ Usually I don't make a list because I don't really like to make one.

The verb 'like' can be followed by either the gerund (-ing form) or the infinitive (to + base verb). However, in this context, 'like to make' is more appropriate to express preference for the action of making a list.

× So like I decided on what I'm gonna buy on on the spot at at the spot.

✓ So I decide what I'm going to buy on the spot.

The sentence mixes past tense 'decided' with present/future context. Since the speaker is talking about a habitual action, present tense 'decide' is correct. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' or rephrased. Repetition of 'on' and 'at' is an error and removed.

× So it's really depends on my mood TV, to be honest.

✓ So it really depends on my mood, to be honest.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'depends' without 'is'. 'It's depends' is incorrect; correct form is 'it depends'. Also, 'TV' seems out of place and is removed.

× I don't make any list for my work because I really hate making list because it feels like it's going to limit my action and the mood of the day so I want to stay flexible as much as possible so I don't make them.

✓ I don't make any lists for my work because I really hate making lists as it feels like it limits my actions and the mood of the day, so I want to stay as flexible as possible, so I don't make them.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to multiple or general instances. Similarly, 'action' should be plural 'actions' to match the context. Also, 'because' is repeated unnecessarily and is replaced with 'as' for better flow.

× I believe that some people don't like making lists because it really limits their actions and your moods.

✓ I believe that some people don't like making lists because it really limits their actions and their moods.

The pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with 'some people' and should be 'their' to maintain agreement in the third person plural.

× An yeah, I feel like staying flexible as much as possible during the day makes you feel more relaxed and more Cheryl about spending.

✓ And yeah, I feel like staying flexible as much as possible during the day makes you feel more relaxed and more cheerful about spending.

The word 'Cheryl' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'cheerful', which is the correct adjective to describe feeling happy or positive.

× I would rather make a list on my phone rather than paper because if it's paper you you will need extra space.

✓ I would rather make a list on my phone rather than on paper because if it's paper, you will need extra space.

The preposition 'on' is required before 'paper' to indicate the medium where the list is made. Also, the repeated 'you' is corrected.

× The paper will use extra space in your bag.

✓ The paper will take up extra space in your bag.

The verb phrase 'take up' is more appropriate than 'use' when referring to occupying space.

× However for phone, because you can just hold it by your hand, it doesn't take any space.

✓ However, with a phone, because you can just hold it in your hand, it doesn't take up any space.

The phrase 'for phone' is incorrect; 'with a phone' is correct. Also, 'by your hand' should be 'in your hand'. The verb phrase 'take up' is used to indicate occupying space.