列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use clear sentence structures and correct verb forms. For example, say "Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember essential items and control my budget."

範例: Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember essential items and control my budget.

建議: Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words. For example, "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and complete them efficiently."

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and complete them efficiently.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. For example, "Some people may not like making lists because they have a good memory and can easily remember their tasks and deadlines."

範例: Some people may not like making lists because they have a good memory and can easily remember their tasks and deadlines.

建議: Avoid unnecessary words and improve sentence completion. Use clear and natural expressions. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can easily remember my tasks."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can easily remember my tasks.

× Yes, definitely when I when I go for a shopping, I I list make a list.

✓ Yes, definitely when I go shopping, I make a list.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect word order. 'Go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Also, 'I I list make a list' is a word order error and repetition. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It's helped me to remember the thing which is essential in needful for me.

✓ It helps me to remember the things which are essential and needed for me.

The original sentence uses 'helped' which is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'the thing which is essential in needful for me' is awkward and incorrect; 'things which are essential and needed for me' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Second, it's also help me to control my budget.

✓ Second, it also helps me to control my budget.

The verb 'help' should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'helps' is correct. Also, 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; 'it' is the correct subject pronoun. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, Sir, when I doing some work, I'll be's plan and it's it's needful that you make a list which is which work is essential for you.

✓ Yes, Sir, when I am doing some work, I plan and it's necessary that you make a list of which work is essential for you.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and pronouns: 'when I doing' should be 'when I am doing'; 'I'll be's plan' is incorrect and unclear, replaced with 'I plan'; 'it's it's needful' is repetitive and awkward, replaced with 'it's necessary'. The corrected sentence is grammatically correct and clearer.

× So it's also helped me to remembering the thing.

✓ So it also helps me to remember things.

'Helped' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'helps' is correct. 'To remembering' is incorrect; the verb after 'to' should be in base form 'remember'. Also, 'the thing' is vague; 'things' is more appropriate here.

× And secondly, it's also helped me to do this work with efficient and efficient manner.

✓ And secondly, it also helps me to do this work in an efficient manner.

'Helped' should be 'helps' for habitual action. 'With efficient and efficient manner' is repetitive and incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in an efficient manner'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× I think that too maybe their memory power power is quite good and they can remember the thing very easily.

✓ I think that maybe their memory power is quite good and they can remember things very easily.

The repetition 'power power' is an error and removed. 'The thing' is vague; 'things' is more appropriate. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× They know which work is too fast, which in which work is doing, which work is due later.

✓ They know which work is urgent, which work is in progress, and which work is due later.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Too fast' is unclear; 'urgent' is a better choice. 'Which in which work is doing' is incorrect; replaced with 'which work is in progress'. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So they don't want to make the list for as a non ssential and they cannot remember that this thing.

✓ So they don't want to make a list as it is non-essential and they cannot remember these things.

'For as a non ssential' is incorrect; corrected to 'as it is non-essential'. 'That this thing' is unclear; 'these things' is more appropriate. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Yeah, Elvis prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy and convenient way.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's an easy and convenient way.

'Elvis' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'I'. The subject pronoun should be 'I'. Also, 'easy and convenient way' needs an article 'an' before it. The corrected sentence is grammatically correct.

× 2nd and the most important thing that I always carry my phone along with me so I can remember the thing very easily and.

✓ Second, and most importantly, I always carry my phone with me so I can remember things very easily.

'2nd' should be written as 'Second' in formal speech. 'The most important thing that' is awkward; 'most importantly' is better. 'Carry my phone along with me' is redundant; 'carry my phone with me' is sufficient. 'The thing' is vague; 'things' is better. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.