列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying 'making a list makes me an organized human being', you can say 'making a list helps me stay organized'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and check verb tenses, e.g., 'what I had forgot' should be 'what I might forget'. Try to keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. This way, I can shop efficiently without wasting time or money.

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid repeating phrases like 'your works of your requirement of your works'. Instead, directly state your point. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, explain briefly how making lists helps you manage time and avoid rushing.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. As a result, I can complete my work without feeling rushed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid saying 'hate to make less' which seems incorrect. Instead, say 'hate making lists'. Also, avoid negative assumptions like calling people lazy; instead, suggest reasons like lack of habit or preference. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, they might feel that lists restrict their flexibility.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better sentence structure. For example, 'time of digital error' is unclear; you can say 'digital age'. Also, avoid sentence fragments and use linking words to connect ideas. Be concise and natural.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to write and see everything at once. However, if I don't have paper handy, I use the notes app on my phone.

× It also helps me to buy items efficiently without worrying too much about what I had forgot.

✓ It also helps me to buy items efficiently without worrying too much about what I had forgotten.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but here the past participle 'forgotten' is required after 'had' to form the past perfect tense correctly.

× Well, I believe if you're working in a corporate organization, it's crucial to make a list of your works of your requirement of your works as it makes you a timetable that is organized and so you don't need to rush.

✓ Well, I believe if you're working in a corporate organization, it's crucial to make a list of your work or your requirements as it helps you organize a timetable so you don't need to rush.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used in plural form; 'work' as an uncountable noun is appropriate here. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× To be honest, I believe that some people they just hate to make less because they're lazy and do not want to think that think about a moment and lacks concentration because making a list makes our work easier.

✓ To be honest, I believe that some people just hate to make lists because they're lazy and do not want to think for a moment and lack concentration, even though making a list makes our work easier.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. 'Less' should be 'lists' to match the context. 'Lacks' should be 'lack' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Well, it's a time of digital error, so whenever I'm in hand with notes or paper I usually write my lists and items.

✓ Well, it's the time of digital era, so whenever I have notes or paper in hand, I usually write my lists and items.

The phrase 'time of digital error' is incorrect; it should be 'time of digital era'. The phrase 'I'm in hand with' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have ... in hand'. Prepositions are corrected accordingly.

× But if any by any chance if I do not have a paper. So I generally write on my notes in phone.

✓ But if, by any chance, I do not have paper, I generally write my notes on my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and has redundant words. 'A paper' should be 'paper' (uncountable). The phrase 'write on my notes in phone' is incorrect; it should be 'write my notes on my phone'. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.