列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy like "memory memorizing things" and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, add a specific example to enrich your answer.

範例: Usually, I don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory and can recall everything I need. For instance, last week I went shopping without a list and managed to buy all the items I needed efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, clarify your point about not knowing if making lists works for you by giving a reason or example.

範例: I usually don't make lists for work because I prioritize tasks in my mind. Since I haven't tried using lists, I am not sure if they would help me, but I rely on my memory to meet deadlines effectively.

建議: Your answer is too long and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide a clearer reason why some people avoid lists, with an example if possible.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and understand their deadlines well. For example, a colleague of mine prefers to remember tasks mentally, thinking that making lists wastes time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and try to be more concise. Also, clarify your example to make it more effective.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to carry. For instance, once I lost a paper list while shopping, and I couldn't remember the items, which caused me a lot of stress.

× Usually whenever I go for shopping, I don't need any kind of list because everything is in my mind and I am quite good at memory memorizing things.

✓ Usually whenever I go shopping, I don't need any kind of list because everything is in my mind and I am quite good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. Also, 'memory memorizing things' is redundant; 'memorizing things' suffices.

× Usually I don't make list for work, I do the work according to the priority of the work and I feel that I even don't require any list to do a particular work because I am good at memorizing things and also then the date.

✓ Usually I don't make a list for work; I do the work according to its priority and feel that I don't even require any list to do a particular task because I am good at memorizing things and also the dates.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'priority of the work' is better expressed as 'its priority'. 'Particular work' is better as 'particular task' for clarity. 'Also then the date' is unclear and corrected to 'also the dates'.

× I feel that some people are good at memorizing things even they all have a they have a proper knowledge about the importance of the work and the deadline in up to which they have to complete the work and they feel that the making of making of list is waste of time for them.

✓ I feel that some people are good at memorizing things; they all have proper knowledge about the importance of the work and the deadline by which they have to complete it, and they feel that making a list is a waste of time for them.

The original sentence has redundant and confusing pronouns like 'even they all have a they have a'. Also, 'in up to which' is incorrect preposition usage; 'by which' is correct. 'The making of making of list' is repetitive and should be 'making a list'. 'Waste of time' needs the article 'a'.

× I would definitely go for making a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient to carry.

✓ I would definitely go for making a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient to carry.

This sentence is correct in preposition usage; no correction needed.

× As once I've made a list on the paper and I lost it in the market and that and that time I was so worried because I even don't remember the things and it was quite difficult for me to know about the things of which I have to shop for.

✓ Once I made a list on paper and lost it in the market. At that time, I was very worried because I didn't even remember the things, and it was quite difficult for me to know what I had to shop for.

The sentence has tense inconsistency: 'I've made' should be simple past 'I made' to match 'lost'. 'I even don't remember' should be past tense 'I didn't even remember'. 'Things of which I have to shop for' is incorrect; correct is 'what I had to shop for'.