列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，且句子结构不完整。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断断续续的表达，同时增加具体细节来支持观点。

範例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it stressful to follow a strict plan. Instead, I prefer to browse freely and buy what I feel I need at the moment.

建議: 回答中存在较多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议学习正确使用时态和词汇，表达时注意逻辑连贯，并用具体例子说明。

範例: Yes, I usually make a simple list to organize my work tasks. However, sometimes unexpected things happen, so I don't always follow the list strictly.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达混乱，难以理解。建议多练习句子结构，避免重复和无意义的词汇，清晰表达观点。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it adds pressure and stress, making them less relaxed.

建議: 回答较为简短且有语法错误。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，增加细节说明为什么手机更方便。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can remind me of my plans, which is very convenient and helps me stay organized.

× It make me more stressful.

✓ It makes me more stressful.

主语是第三人称单数"It"，谓语动词应加-s，变为"makes"。

× I need to. Follow my plans to go shop shopping.

✓ I need to follow my plans to go shopping.

动词"go"后面直接加动名词"shopping"，不需要"shop"。另外，句中不应有句号断开。

× It's not really. Relax things for me.

✓ It's not really a relaxing thing for me.

"Relax"是动词，形容词形式应为"relaxing"，且"thing"前需加冠词"a"。

× I make a easy glazed for my work because I need to plan what I need to do in waste, but I'm not a follow on it because a lot of saying is imagine Lee need to do so the plans will disrupt.

✓ I make an easy list for my work because I need to plan what I need to do in advance, but I don't follow it because a lot of things are imaginary and the plans get disrupted.

"a easy"应为"an easy"，"glazed"应为"list"，"in waste"应为"in advance"，"I'm not a follow on it"应为"I don't follow it"，"a lot of saying is imagine Lee need to do"应为"a lot of things are imaginary"，句子结构混乱需调整。

× I believe that some people don't watch you make list because it's.

✓ I believe that some people don't like to make lists because it

"don't watch you make list"语法错误，应为"don't like to make lists"，且"list"应为复数。

× Would give way give Lamb a lot of stress?

✓ would give them a lot of stress.

"give way give Lamb"无意义，应为"give them a lot of stress"，"them"指代前文的"people"。

× Well, I preferred making always on my phone because it can remind me when I forget my planes.

✓ Well, I prefer making lists on my phone because it can remind me when I forget my plans.

"preferred"为过去式，句意为现在习惯应用一般现在时"prefer"，"making always"语序错误，应为"making lists"，"planes"应为"plans"。