列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений. Например, можно начать с прямого ответа, затем объяснить причину и привести пример.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because I find it hard to remember everything. For instance, in the past, I forgot many items when I didn't prepare a list, so I had to return to the store again.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные слова. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: Yes, I make lists when I start a new work project or study. It helps me achieve my goals because organizing my thoughts makes tasks easier to complete than if I keep them only in my mind.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Нужно использовать более точные выражения и грамматику, а также привести конкретные причины с примерами. Связующие слова помогут сделать ответ логичным.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult to organize their thoughts clearly. Also, without a clear goal, it can be hard to create an effective list.

建議: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясных выражений. Следует использовать правильную грамматику и более точные слова. Также стоит связать идеи с помощью связующих слов.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because crossing out completed tasks gives me a sense of satisfaction. However, I often use my phone for convenience, as it saves time compared to writing by hand.

× I am not that good in memorizing things

✓ I am not that good at memorizing things

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. The phrase 'good at' is used to indicate skill or ability in something.

× so doing list for me is essential before going shopping

✓ so making a list for me is essential before going shopping

The noun 'list' is countable, so it requires an article like 'a' when singular. Also, 'doing list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'making a list'.

× in the past I didn't do a list when I go to shop

✓ in the past I didn't make a list when I went shopping

The verb tense should be consistent in the past. 'Didn't do' is past tense, so 'go' should be 'went' to match. Also, 'make a list' is the correct collocation, and 'go to shop' should be 'went shopping'.

× or so I as a result I forgot a lot of things and should to go to the shop at 2nd

✓ so as a result, I forgot a lot of things and had to go to the shop a second time

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Should to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'had to go'. Also, 'at 2nd' is unclear; 'a second time' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do list when I start some new work project or when you studies

✓ Yes, I make a list when I start a new work project or when I study

'Do list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. 'Some new work project' should be 'a new work project' because 'project' is singular and countable. 'You studies' is incorrect; it should be 'I study' to maintain subject consistency.

× when you studies

✓ when I study

The pronoun 'you' does not agree with the verb 'studies'. The correct subject pronoun here is 'I' with the verb 'study'.

× when I structured my thoughts, it's for me easier to do them neither if it's only on my mind

✓ when I structure my thoughts, it's easier for me to do them than if they are only in my mind

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect word choice. 'Structured' should be 'structure' to match present tense. 'Neither' is incorrect here; 'than' is the correct comparative conjunction. 'If it's only on my mind' should be 'if they are only in my mind' for clarity and agreement.

× some people don't like doing less because of the several reasons

✓ some people don't like making lists because of several reasons

'Doing less' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'making lists'. Also, 'the several reasons' should be 'several reasons' without 'the'.

× A2 organized their salts and write it clearly

✓ They are not organized and don't write them clearly

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'A2' seems to be a typo or mishearing. The intended meaning is likely that people are not organized and do not write their lists clearly. 'Salts' is likely a mishearing of 'lists'. Also, pronouns and verb forms are corrected for agreement.

× if you don't have some proper goal, it's hard to do some list or if

✓ if you don't have a proper goal, it's hard to make a list

The sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect quantifiers. 'Some proper goal' should be 'a proper goal'. 'Do some list' should be 'make a list'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'or if', which is removed for clarity.

× I like making a list on paper based because of the several reasons

✓ I like making a list on paper because of several reasons

'On paper based' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'the several reasons' should be 'several reasons' without 'the'.

× after doing my shopping or the job they should do a crossing out

✓ after doing my shopping or the job, I should cross things out

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper subject and verb agreement. 'They should do a crossing out' is awkward; 'I should cross things out' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Gives me some films of satisfaction neither than informed

✓ It gives me some feeling of satisfaction rather than being informed

The sentence lacks a subject; 'Gives me' should be 'It gives me'. 'Films' is a typo for 'feeling'. 'Neither than' is incorrect; 'rather than' is the correct phrase.

× most of the time I do my lists on FAR because it's convenient

✓ most of the time I do my lists on my phone because it's convenient

'On FAR' is unclear and likely a typo or mishearing. The intended phrase is 'on my phone', which is a common device for making lists.

× compared to the list it didn't spend that

✓ compared to a paper list, it doesn't take as much time

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It didn't spend that' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely that using the phone list is quicker than a paper list. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.