列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and coherent. Avoid sentence fragments like "Collects all my ideas into one common place" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the specific items I need. I use a shopping app called Walmart It, which collects all my ideas in one place, making it easy to purchase everything quickly.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you could improve coherence by adding linking words and slightly expanding your explanation with specific examples or reasons.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of three major tasks to accomplish each day. This helps me stay focused and manage my time more efficiently because I can prioritize important work and avoid distractions.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "in antithesis to" and use simpler expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it requires effort and planning. Also, lists make sure nothing is forgotten, which might conflict with their carefree lifestyle.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and plural forms, and connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.

範例: It depends on the situation. I prefer paper lists because they are tangible, and I enjoy physically checking off items. Although making lists on my phone is more efficient, I often forget to complete them.

× I do make a list on a shopping app called Walmart It.

✓ I do make a list on a shopping app called Walmart It collects all my ideas into one common place and I'm able to purchase those instantly.

The original sentence incorrectly capitalizes 'It' and separates it as if it were a new sentence. The phrase 'Walmart It' should be 'Walmart. It' to separate the two sentences properly. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes listed, the correction here is to join the sentences properly and fix the article usage by adding a period. This is a sentence structure and punctuation issue, but since punctuation is not listed, the correction is to merge the sentences properly.

× Some people do not like making a list because making list requires conscious effort.

✓ Some people do not like making a list because making a list requires conscious effort.

The phrase 'making list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Since 'list' is a singular countable noun, it requires an article. Adding 'a' corrects the singular noun usage.

× I prefer paper list because there are tangible.

✓ I prefer paper lists because they are tangible.

'Paper list' should be plural 'paper lists' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'there are' is incorrect here; it should be 'they are' referring to the lists. This corrects the article and pronoun usage to match plural form.

× Making list of my phone is more efficient, but I often forget about completing such a list.

✓ Making a list on my phone is more efficient, but I often forget about completing such a list.

'Making list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, the preposition 'of' is incorrect here; it should be 'on' to indicate the device used. The correction addresses the singular noun article and preposition usage.