列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "before shop" yerine "before shopping" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "make it. Checklists" ifadesi anlamsal olarak karışık. Daha akıcı ve net cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, neden liste yapmayı tercih ettiğinizi daha açık ve kısa cümlelerle ifade edin.

範例: Yes, I always make a checklist before shopping because my mind can get very busy, and I might forget some items. Therefore, I find lists very helpful.

建議: Cevabınızda bazı cümleler tamamlanmamış ve tekrarlar mevcut. "It's that" ifadesi anlamsız. Ayrıca, "I talked to many patients, that's why" cümlesi bağlam açısından zayıf. Cümlelerinizi daha net ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanın ve cümleleri tamamlayın.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. Since my job is very busy and I talk to many patients, lists keep me organized.

建議: Cevabınızda bazı cümleler tamamlanmamış ve bağlaç kullanımı zayıf. "time consuming and." ifadesi eksik. Ayrıca, "And I believe" yerine daha uygun bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak ve bağlaçlarla destekleyerek daha akıcı hale getirin.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to do the tasks directly instead of writing them down. Also, some may consider list-making tedious.

建議: Cevabınızda birçok cümle tamamlanmamış ve tekrarlar var. "I like tactical things" ifadesi belirsiz ve "this version" neyi kastettiğiniz net değil. Cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak ve daha açık ifadeler kullanarak cevap verin. Ayrıca, neden kağıt tercih ettiğinizi net bir şekilde açıklayın.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find that physically writing things down helps me remember tasks better than using my phone.

× Yes, I make a checklist before shop.

✓ Yes, I make a checklist before shopping.

The verb 'shop' should be in the gerund form 'shopping' after the preposition 'before' to indicate the action that happens prior to shopping.

× That's why I prefer to make it. Checklists.

✓ That's why I prefer to make checklists.

The sentence is fragmented. 'Checklists' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete thought.

× Yes, absolutely. I make a list for my work and it's that.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I make a list for my work and that's it.

The phrase 'it's that' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'that's it' to indicate completion.

× It's helping me to not forget anything.

✓ It helps me not to forget anything.

The sentence uses the present continuous 'It's helping' incorrectly. The simple present 'It helps' is appropriate here. Also, 'to not forget' is better as 'not to forget' for natural word order.

× My work is very busy and.

✓ My work is very busy.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Removing the conjunction 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I talked to many patients, that's why.

✓ I talk to many patients, that's why.

The present tense 'talk' is appropriate here to describe a habitual action, not the past tense 'talked'.

× Some people don't like making lists because they might find it time consuming and.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they might find it time consuming.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incorrect. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× They can choose to do the work instead of writing them down.

✓ They can choose to do the work instead of writing it down.

The pronoun 'them' incorrectly refers to 'work' which is singular and uncountable. The correct pronoun is 'it'.

× Because I like tactical things, I find it this version more efficient to memorize that task, that's why.

✓ Because I like tactile things, I find this version more efficient to memorize the task; that's why.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors. 'Tactical' should be 'tactile' (relating to touch). The phrase 'it this version' is incorrect; it should be 'this version'. 'That task' is better as 'the task'. The sentence is better connected with a semicolon.

× I I prefer to write them down.

✓ I prefer to write them down.

The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.