列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several grammatical errors and fragmented sentences. To improve, try to form complete sentences, avoid redundancy, and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find writing it down time-consuming. Also, I tend to shop spontaneously and don't like following strict plans. However, sometimes I make a list if I have many items to buy to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'US winning when they come.' To improve, respond directly to the question with clear sentences, explain your habits, and avoid confusing expressions. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to handle tasks as they come. I find this approach works for me, although sometimes I forget small tasks. I am trying to be more organized by planning ahead.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. To improve, form complete sentences, clarify your ideas, and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about reasons why some people dislike making lists.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time to write everything down. Also, some people find it hard to stick to a plan and prefer to be spontaneous. Therefore, they avoid making lists to keep their options open.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb tenses, avoid sentence fragments, and express your ideas more smoothly. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

範例: If I were to make a list, I would definitely prefer writing it on paper. I believe that physically writing things down helps me remember better and stay focused on my plan, unlike typing on a phone which can be distracting.

× If I need to shop.

✓ If I need to shop,

The sentence 'If I need to shop.' is a dependent clause and cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. It should be connected to the following sentence with a comma to form a complete thought.

× it is time exhausting if I have to write all that I need to shut down.

✓ it is time exhausting if I have to write all that I need to shop.

The phrase 'need to shut down' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is 'need to shop.' The word 'shut down' is a wrong choice of verb here, so it should be replaced with 'shop' to match the context.

× I'm not really good at following. Another pattern.

✓ I'm not really good at following another pattern.

The sentence is incorrectly split, and the pronoun 'Another' is capitalized and separated unnecessarily. It should be combined into one sentence without a period, and 'another' should be lowercase.

× I don't think I'm disciplined now today.

✓ I don't think I'm disciplined nowadays.

The phrase 'now today' is redundant and awkward. The correct expression is 'nowadays' to indicate the current time period.

× Usually like I said earlier.

✓ Usually, like I said earlier,

This is a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the following sentence with commas to form a complete sentence.

× I am not. I am not disciplined enough to follow another pattern.

✓ I am not disciplined enough to follow another pattern.

The sentence is unnecessarily split into two parts. It should be combined into one complete sentence for clarity.

× So I do my work, US winning when they come.

✓ So I do my work as it comes.

The phrase 'US winning when they come' is unclear and likely a mishearing or transcription error. The intended meaning is probably 'as it comes,' which is a common expression meaning to handle tasks as they arrive.

× What think some people don't like making list?

✓ Why do you think some people don't like making lists?

The original sentence is missing auxiliary verbs and has incorrect word order. The correct question form requires 'Why do you think' and 'lists' should be plural.

× some people don't like making list?

✓ some people don't like making lists?

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× For the mirrors in that it is time consuming.

✓ For the reasons that it is time consuming,

The phrase 'For the mirrors in that' is incorrect and likely a mishearing. The correct phrase is 'For the reasons that' to introduce an explanation.

× To sit down and write out a list for things you want to buy or things you wanna do.

✓ To sit down and write out a list of things you want to buy or things you want to do.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'of' when referring to the contents of a list.

× And I also think people are not disciplined enough to follow an ordered pattern, so they prefer to do things as.

✓ And I also think people are not disciplined enough to follow an ordered pattern, so they prefer to do things as they come.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'as they come' completes the thought and is a common expression meaning to do things spontaneously.

× If I was to make a list, I will definitely go with the traditional parting of writing down things.

✓ If I were to make a list, I would definitely go with the traditional part of writing down things.

In conditional sentences contrary to fact, 'If I were' is correct instead of 'If I was.' Also, 'would' is used in the main clause instead of 'will.' The word 'parting' is a typo and should be 'part.'

× I think taking the time and effort to write things down. Would keep me on my toes to stick to the plan rather than just. Keen into a phone?

✓ I think taking the time and effort to write things down would keep me on my toes to stick to the plan rather than just keying into a phone.

The sentence is fragmented and has a typo: 'Keen' should be 'keying.' Also, the period after 'down' should be removed to connect the sentence properly.