列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time by allowing me to shop quickly and efficiently.

建議: 回答中断且表达不完整，建议完整表达原因，并使用连词连接句子，使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before my workday. However, it doesn't always work because I get easily distracted by notifications on my phone and other surroundings.

建議: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达观点，并避免断句。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because if they cannot complete all the tasks, they may feel disappointed and unsatisfied with themselves.

建議: 回答断断续续且有语法错误，建议用完整句子表达，并说明原因，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I can quickly record ideas whenever they come to mind, and it's easy to check and update my list anytime.

× I want to buy an I want to finish the buying.

✓ I want to buy and finish the buying.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，导致表达不清晰。建议使用连词“and”连接两个动作，使句子完整通顺。

× I want to reduce the time shopping, so actually I will quickly take what I want and finish the shopping.

✓ I want to reduce the time spent shopping, so actually I will quickly take what I want and finish the shopping.

“reduce the time shopping”中缺少介词“spent”，正确表达应为“reduce the time spent shopping”，表示减少购物所花费的时间。

× I usually make A to do list before a day or my work.

✓ I usually make a to-do list a day before my work.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符连接为“to-do list”。另外，“before a day or my work”表达不清，应改为“a day before my work”。

× However, it doesn't work every time because I'm easily distracted by.

✓ However, it doesn't work every time because I'm easily distracted.

句子末尾“distracted by”后缺少宾语，导致句子不完整。应去掉“by”或补充宾语。这里去掉“by”更合适。

× The things surrounding means some notifications pop up to my phone or.

✓ The things around me mean that some notifications pop up on my phone.

“The things surrounding”表达不完整，应为“the things around me”。“pop up to my phone”介词错误，应为“pop up on my phone”。句尾“or”无意义，应删除。

× I think it's mailing because if.

✓ I think it's frustrating because if.

“mailing”用词错误，语境中应表达“令人沮丧”，故改为“frustrating”。

× People can't finish perfectly for the work they decided to do.

✓ People can't finish the work they decided to do perfectly.

“finish perfectly for the work”结构不正确，应调整为“finish the work perfectly”。

× They will feel disappointed and not satisfied for themselves.

✓ They will feel disappointed and not satisfied with themselves.

“satisfied”后应接介词“with”，表示对自己不满意。

× So I think that's the main reason why people don't like to make a list.

✓ So I think that's the main reason why people don't like making a list.

“like to make a list”虽不错误，但“like making a list”更符合习惯用法，表达更自然。

× Definitely on my phone because when the things.

✓ Definitely on my phone because when things

“when the things.”句子不完整，去掉“the”并去掉句号，使句子连贯。

× Come to my mind.

✓ come to my mind.

句首不应大写，且应与前句连贯。

× I like to record it down.

✓ I like to write it down.

“record it down”用法不当，习惯用法是“write it down”，表示记下来。

× At that time, so I prefer to make a list my mammal.

✓ At that time, so I prefer to make a list in my memo.

“my mammal”拼写错误，应为“my memo”，表示备忘录。

× In a memo on my phone.

✓ in a memo on my phone.

句首不应大写，且应与前句连贯。

× And it's easy to check. 2.

✓ And it's easy to check.

句尾“2”无意义，应删除。