列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific reasons using simple, correct English. Avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my school work. It helps me remember important topics like Dylan and Tomorrowland, which are useful for students.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is hard to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to explain reasons.

範例: Some people do not like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily without writing them down.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to carry when I go outside, and I don't have to worry about forgetting paper at home.

× Yes, of course I make adjust when I am going to shopping because it is very beneficial for Maine member.

✓ Yes, of course I make adjustments when I am going shopping because it is very beneficial for main members.

The word 'adjust' should be plural 'adjustments' to match the context of making multiple changes or plans. Also, 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping' without 'to'. 'Maine member' seems to be a mishearing or typo; assuming 'main members' is intended, which is plural to match the context.

× Yes, of course I make adjust when I am going to shopping because it is very beneficial for Maine member.

✓ Yes, of course I make adjustments when I am going shopping because it is very beneficial for main members.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without the preposition 'to'. This is a common error with verb + gerund forms.

× The things is easy.

✓ The things are easy.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Yes, then I am going to school and call is I make a list to my home for Erica, so I easily remember the topic.

✓ Yes, when I go to school, I make a list at home for Erica so I can easily remember the topic.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Call is' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, then I am going to school and call is I make a list to my home for Erica, so I easily remember the topic.

✓ Yes, when I go to school, I make a list at home for Erica so I can easily remember the topic.

The pronoun usage is unclear and incorrect. 'Call is' does not fit; replacing with 'I can' clarifies the meaning.

× Which topic are two Dillon anthers, Dylan and Tomorrowland?

✓ The topics are two: Dylan and Tomorrowland.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It is corrected to a clear statement listing the two topics.

× It is for important for every student.

✓ It is important for every student.

The phrase 'for important' is incorrect; 'important' is an adjective and does not need 'for' before it in this context.

× There are a number of people scan not forget anything, so don't do not like a list easily remember the things when going to shopping and also the memory is a very best.

✓ There are a number of people who cannot forget anything, so they do not like lists and can easily remember things when going shopping; also, their memory is very good.

'Scan not' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot'. 'Don't do not' is a double negative and incorrect. Pronouns are missing or incorrect; 'they' is needed. 'A list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize. 'The memory is a very best' is incorrect; 'their memory is very good' is correct.

× There are a number of people scan not forget anything, so don't do not like a list easily remember the things when going to shopping and also the memory is a very best.

✓ There are a number of people who cannot forget anything, so they do not like lists and can easily remember things when going shopping; also, their memory is very good.

'Going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'.

× There are a number of people scan not forget anything, so don't do not like a list easily remember the things when going to shopping and also the memory is a very best.

✓ There are a number of people who cannot forget anything, so they do not like lists and can easily remember things when going shopping; also, their memory is very good.

'A list' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'people' and generalize the statement.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I go to the outside the home so easily carry the phone with me, not a paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I go outside the home, so I can easily carry the phone with me, not paper.

'Go to the outside the home' is incorrect; it should be 'go outside the home' without 'to the'. Also, 'not a paper' should be 'not paper' as paper is uncountable here.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I go to the outside the home so easily carry the phone with me, not a paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I go outside the home, so I can easily carry the phone with me, not paper.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is uncountable in this context and should not have an article.

× Sometimes I forgetting paper at home.

✓ Sometimes I forget paper at home.

'I forgetting' is incorrect; the correct simple present tense is 'I forget' to express habitual action.