列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'definitely' อย่างถูกต้อง และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น 'go to shopping' ควรใช้ 'go shopping' แทน นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

範例: Yes, definitely. I always make a list when I go shopping to ensure I buy everything I need and don't miss any items at the supermarket or department store.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการออกเสียงและไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'make list' ควรเป็น 'make a list' และคำว่า 'tax' น่าจะหมายถึง 'tasks' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my tasks when I want to prioritize. This skill is very important because it helps me organize my work and accomplish all my jobs within the time frame.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'go to shopping' ควรเป็น 'go shopping' และ 'a stuff' ควรเป็น 'stuff' หรือ 'items' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและชัดเจน

範例: I believe some people go shopping or to the supermarket just for window shopping. They are not serious about buying anything specific; they just want to browse and survey the market.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'might lost it' ควรเป็น 'might lose it' และ 'I going to shopping' ควรเป็น 'when I go shopping' รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติ

範例: Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient when I go out. I can just pick up my phone and see the list immediately. If I write it down on paper, I might lose it while I'm shopping.

× Yes that definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

The phrase 'Yes that definitely.' is missing a comma after 'Yes' and the word 'that' is unnecessary here. The correct expression is 'Yes, definitely.' which is a common affirmative response.

× I always make a list when I want to go to shopping.

✓ I always make a list when I want to go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an activity and does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'.

× This is to ensure that I can buy everything perfectly an I will not miss any items when I go to supermarket or department stores.

✓ This is to ensure that I can buy everything perfectly and I will not miss any items when I go to the supermarket or department stores.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× Yes, I always make list for my tax or when I want to prioritize.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my tasks or when I want to prioritize.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'tax' seems to be a typo or incorrect word here; 'tasks' fits the context better.

× The talks.

✓ The tasks.

The word 'talks' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks' which means jobs or duties. This is likely a typographical error.

× This kills is very important for prioritizing the tasks and it helps me a lot in organize the tax an I can accomplish all my jobs within the time frame.

✓ This skill is very important for prioritizing the tasks and it helps me a lot in organizing the tasks and I can accomplish all my jobs within the time frame.

'kills' should be 'skill'. Also, 'organize' should be in gerund form 'organizing' after the preposition 'in'. 'tax' should be 'tasks'. The sentence also needs 'and' instead of 'an' to connect clauses.

× I believe that some people want to go to shopping or go to supermarket just for a window shopping.

✓ I believe that some people want to go shopping or go to the supermarket just for window shopping.

'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'go to supermarket' needs the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket'. 'a window shopping' is incorrect; 'window shopping' is uncountable and does not need 'a'.

× They are not serious in buying a stuff for themselves so they just want to survey the market rather than to a specific buying.

✓ They are not serious about buying stuff for themselves so they just want to survey the market rather than make a specific purchase.

'a stuff' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The phrase 'serious in buying' should be 'serious about buying'. 'to a specific buying' is incorrect; it should be 'make a specific purchase' or 'buy a specific item'.

× An item.

✓ They are not serious about buying stuff for themselves, so they just want to survey the market rather than make a specific purchase.

The fragment 'An item.' is incomplete and does not form a sentence. It should be combined with the previous sentence to complete the thought.

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient for me when I go outside and when I want to see a list, I just pick up my phone and see it right away.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient for me when I go out and when I want to see the list, I just pick up my phone and see it right away.

The phrase 'go outside' is less natural here; 'go out' is more appropriate for leaving home. Also, 'see a list' should be 'see the list' because it refers to a specific list previously mentioned.

× If I write it down on the paper, I might lost it during the way.

✓ If I write it down on the paper, I might lose it on the way.

'might lost' is incorrect because modal verbs like 'might' are followed by the base form of the verb, so it should be 'might lose'. Also, 'during the way' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the way'.

× I going to shopping.

✓ I am going shopping.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. Also, 'to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping' without 'to'.