列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but pay attention to verb forms and pluralization, such as 'categories' should be 'categorize'. Also, try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. Therefore, I categorize my list into different sections, such as groceries and household products, which helps me stay organized and avoid impulse buying. This way, I can save both time and money during my shopping trip.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words like 'which' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a To-Do List for my work and categorize my tasks based on their priority, which helps me stay organized and manage my time more effectively. For example, having a clear list allows me to finish everything on time and reduces my stress.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains minor errors like 'less' instead of 'lists' and missing articles. Try to use linking words such as 'because' and 'and' properly to connect ideas.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can easily remember everything they need without writing things down, and they also think making a list is extra work and time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has errors like 'forever' instead of 'prefer' and incomplete sentences. Use correct vocabulary and complete your ideas. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so it is very convenient. For example, when I'm out shopping or walking, I can quickly add or remove items without worrying about losing a piece of paper. Plus, digital lists are more organized and easier to update, so I find them much more useful.

× I also categories my list into different sections, such as groceries and household products, which helps me stay organized and avoid impulse buying.

✓ I also categorize my list into different sections, such as groceries and household products, which helps me stay organized and avoid impulse buying.

The verb 'categories' is incorrectly used; the correct form is 'categorize' to match the subject 'I' and the present tense. The error is due to using the third person singular form instead of the base form after 'I'.

× Yes, I usually make it To Do List for my work and categories my tasks based on their priority, which helps me stay organized and manage my time more effectively.

✓ Yes, I usually make a To Do List for my work and categorize my tasks based on their priority, which helps me stay organized and manage my time more effectively.

The verb 'categories' is incorrectly used; it should be 'categorize' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'make it To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'make a To Do List'. The errors are due to incorrect verb form and article usage.

× For example, having a career list also allows me. Finish everything on time and reduce my stress.

✓ For example, having a career list also allows me to finish everything on time and reduce my stress.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Allows me.' should be connected with the following infinitive phrase 'to finish everything on time and reduce my stress' to form a complete sentence.

× Some people dislike making less because they believe they can easily remember everything they need without writing things down, so they prefer to rely on their memory and also they think making a list is an extra work and time consuming.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can easily remember everything they need without writing things down, so they prefer to rely on their memory and also they think making a list is extra work and time-consuming.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'an extra work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable; it should be 'extra work'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I forever to make a list on my phone 'cause I always have it with me, so it is very convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so it is very convenient.

'Forever' is incorrectly used instead of 'prefer'. Also, the contraction ''cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in this context. The error is due to incorrect word choice.

× Plus digital lists are more organized and easier to update, so I find them much more if it.

✓ Plus, digital lists are more organized and easier to update, so I find them much better.

The phrase 'much more if it' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'much better' to correctly express preference. The error is due to incorrect pronoun and phrase usage.