列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为简单，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，同时句子应更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because supermarkets have so many items that it's easy to forget what I need. Making a list helps me remember everything and shop quickly, which is important since I have a busy schedule.

建議: 回答中表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，建议使用更自然的句子结构，并且避免重复词汇，增加连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me prioritize tasks based on importance and urgency. This way, I can work more efficiently and stay organized.

建議: 回答中有较多语法和表达错误，且逻辑不够清晰，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达观点时更明确。

範例: I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but I think it might be because they find it troublesome or difficult to follow, so they feel it's not useful.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，明确比较两种方式的优缺点。

範例: I use both paper and my phone to make lists. Making lists on my phone is convenient when I don't have pen or paper, but writing on paper can be more helpful for remembering things.

× So Make a list can help me remember what I need truly.

✓ So making a list can help me remember what I truly need.

这里“Make a list”应使用动名词形式“making a list”，因为它作为主语使用。动名词在句中作主语时，需用-ing形式。

× And I have a busy life, so Make a List can let me have a fast speed to shop.

✓ And I have a busy life, so making a list can help me shop faster.

同样，“Make a List”应改为动名词“making a list”，且表达更自然应使用“shop faster”而非“have a fast speed to shop”。

× Like make a list for my work 'cause the list can help can help me.

✓ Like making a list for my work because the list can help me.

“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”，且“can help can help me”重复，应删去一个“can help”。

× So have a list can help me have a more efficient and organized work.

✓ So having a list can help me have more efficient and organized work.

“have a list”应改为动名词“having a list”，且“a more efficient and organized work”中“work”不可数，去掉冠词“a”。

× Actually, I don't really know why people don't like make a list list, because I'm a person who like make a list very much.

✓ Actually, I don't really know why people don't like making a list, because I'm a person who likes making a list very much.

“like make a list”应改为“like making a list”，动词“like”后接动名词。且“people don't like make a list list”中重复“list”应去掉。

× because I'm a person who like make a list very much.

✓ because I'm a person who likes making a list very much.

关系代词“who”指代单数“person”，谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式“likes”。

× If I mute your answer this question, I will think maybe the person sank making all this is a little bit of trouble or it's hard to obey it, so they think make the list is useless.

✓ If I answer this question, I will think maybe the person who stops making all this finds it a little bit troublesome or it's hard to follow, so they think making the list is useless.

“mute your answer”不合适，应改为“answer”。“person sank making all this”语法错误，应改为“person who stops making all this”。“make the list”应改为“making the list”。

× Actually, I used to both two ways to make a list.

✓ Actually, I used both ways to make a list.

“used to both two ways”表达不正确，应为“used both ways”。

× Only one hand make a list on my phone is the more convenient in the instant way, especially when I don't have a pen or some paper in my bag or my hand.

✓ Only on one hand, making a list on my phone is more convenient instantly, especially when I don't have a pen or some paper in my bag or in my hand.

“Only one hand make a list”语序错误，应为“Only on one hand, making a list”。“in the instant way”表达不自然，应改为“instantly”。

× However, around and make a list on paper is better way to help you.

✓ However, writing and making a list on paper is a better way to help you.

“around and make a list”不合适，应改为“writing and making a list”。“better way”前应加不定冠词“a”。