列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using complete sentences and avoiding unnecessary pauses. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you make a list. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy.

建議: Improve clarity by using correct sentence structures and linking words. Explain clearly how making a list helps you with your work. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make a list high' and 'describe my work for looking though'.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me focus on the tasks I need to finish, so I can manage my time better and be more productive.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences. For example, explain reasons why some people avoid making lists in a simple and clear way.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember their tasks in their head, and they find lists unnecessary or stressful.

建議: Use complete sentences and clearer expressions. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to carry around and I can quickly check it whenever I need to.

× Yes, I always make a list when I shop. So that I don't forget my. Shopping. What I need important?

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop so that I don't forget the important things I need.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So that I don't forget my. Shopping. What I need important?' is not a proper sentence structure. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I do. I make a list high and I work.

✓ Yes, I do. I make a list and work.

The phrase 'make a list high and I work' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'high' is misused here. The corrected sentence removes 'high' to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× It is very useful to me because I can focus my work and task every day what I need to finish.

✓ It is very useful to me because I can focus on my work and tasks every day that I need to finish.

The original sentence lacks proper prepositions and relative clauses. 'Focus my work and task' should be 'focus on my work and tasks'. Also, 'what I need to finish' should be 'that I need to finish' to correctly modify 'tasks'.

× That's very helpful for me because I can describe my work for looking though.

✓ That's very helpful for me because I can describe my work when looking through it.

The phrase 'describe my work for looking though' is incorrect. The preposition 'for' is misused and 'though' should be 'through'. The corrected sentence uses 'when looking through it' to convey the intended meaning.

× Maybe they don't like to make a list because they never take headache because they try to own self work and they had.

✓ Maybe they don't like to make a list because they never get headaches since they try to do their own work themselves.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and idiomatic expressions. 'Take headache' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get headaches'. 'Own self work' should be 'do their own work themselves' for clarity and correctness.

× Uh, their head inside whatever he needs to work.

✓ They keep everything in their head about whatever work they need to do.

The sentence incorrectly switches pronouns from 'their' to 'he'. Consistent pronoun use is necessary. Also, 'head inside' is not idiomatic; 'keep everything in their head' is the correct expression.

× I make a list on paper because I looking very easy on paper and then carry on my hand.

✓ I make a list on paper because it is very easy to look at on paper and carry in my hand.

The phrase 'I looking very easy on paper' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it is very easy to look at on paper'. Also, 'carry on my hand' should be 'carry in my hand' to use the correct preposition.

× I always can look this paper an describe very easy.

✓ I can always look at this paper and describe things very easily.

The sentence misuses pronouns and adverbs. 'Look this paper' should be 'look at this paper'. 'Describe very easy' should be 'describe things very easily' to use the correct adverb form.