列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You need to improve your grammar and clarity. For example, say 'It helps reduce my shopping time' instead of 'the helps reduce my shipping time'. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'I ensures that I do forget'. Try to make your answer more natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using smoother linking words and correcting minor grammar errors. For example, say 'I make a list of my deliverables to ensure I don't forget any pending tasks.' Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I make a list of my deliverables because my work requires accuracy, and this helps me keep track of all pending tasks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to directly answer the question with clear reasons. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously or find lists restrictive.' Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and give a specific reason. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on paper because writing helps me remember better.' Avoid unclear phrases like 'isn't it people?'.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them more easily.

× Uh, the helps reduce my shipping time.

✓ Uh, this helps reduce my shopping time.

The pronoun 'the' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'this' to refer to the method of making a list. Also, 'shipping' is a typo and should be 'shopping'.

× I ensures that I do forget to pick up anything at night.

✓ I ensure that I do not forget to pick up anything at night.

The verb 'ensures' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'ensure'. Also, 'do forget' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'do not forget' to express the intended meaning.

× In fact, I make it the list of my deliverables so as to make sure that I don't forget to deliver any pending task.

✓ In fact, I make a list of my deliverables so as to make sure that I don't forget to deliver any pending tasks.

The phrase 'make it the list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Also, 'any pending task' should be plural 'any pending tasks' to match the context.

× How does zoom? This is a result of personal choices and preferences.

✓ How does zoom? This is a result of personal choices and preferences.

The sentence 'How does zoom?' is unclear and seems incorrect; however, since it does not fit the grammar problem types listed, no correction is made here.

× Everyone likes to do what works in there, however, not making at least my result into you missing some of your delivery *****.

✓ Everyone likes to do what works for them; however, not making at least a list may result in you missing some of your deliveries.

The pronouns 'there' and 'my' are incorrectly used; 'there' should be 'them' to refer to people, and 'my' should be 'a' to indicate an indefinite list. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× I prefer to use a paper, isn't it people?

✓ I prefer to use paper, isn't it?

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable. Also, 'isn't it people?' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is removed for clarity.

× Makes it easier to remember for me for example.

✓ It makes it easier for me to remember, for example.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure; adding 'It' as the subject and rearranging improves clarity and correctness.

× Every time I try to read, I also try to write down what I'm reading that we can easily remember what I've written down.

✓ Every time I try to read, I also try to write down what I'm reading so that I can easily remember what I've written down.

The pronoun 'we' is incorrectly used; it should be 'I' to match the subject. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'so that' to indicate purpose.