列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses or incomplete thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list when I shop because it is very convenient; I write everything down so I don't forget anything.'

範例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy, and this way I avoid forgetting important items.

建議: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to combine sentences using connectors like 'and' or 'which' to make your answer more coherent. Also, use articles correctly, for example, 'a list' instead of 'list'.

範例: Yes, I do make a list for my work, and it is really helpful because it allows me to complete tasks on time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Also, avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they feel bound to follow them strictly, which can be stressful. However, I think making lists is useful.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them, but I believe lists help organize tasks effectively.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use full sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on paper because when I use my phone, other apps distract me.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me with other apps, so paper helps me stay focused.

× Yes, I make list when I shop becauses it is very convenient and I write everything in the list, so I do not. Forget anything to buy?

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it is very convenient and I write everything in the list, so I do not forget anything to buy.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a' before it. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence 'so I do not. Forget anything to buy?' is incorrect; it should be 'so I do not forget anything to buy.' The period after 'do not' is incorrect and breaks the sentence.

× Yes, I do make list for work. It is really helpful for me to complete my work on time and not to forget anything important. It is very convenient for me.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for work. It is really helpful for me to complete my work on time and not to forget anything important. It is very convenient for me.

Again, 'list' is singular and countable, so it requires the article 'a' before it.

× People don't like to make list becauses. From my perspective it is. Bondam to the list to complete the work, but I think it's not a wise idea to make a list.

✓ People don't like to make lists because, from my perspective, it is a bond to the list to complete the work, but I think it's not a wise idea to make a list.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to making lists in general. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence structure is awkward; 'bondam' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; assuming it means 'bond' or 'bondage', it should be 'a bond'. Also, punctuation and sentence flow are corrected for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list from paper be 'cause whenever I open the phone. Other apps distract me, so I like to make list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because whenever I open the phone, other apps distract me, so I like to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'make a list from paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, 'be 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. 'Make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is singular and countable.