列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and has grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say: "Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I find it hard to remember more than eight items. Therefore, I prepare a list and shop according to it."

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I find it difficult to remember more than eight items. Therefore, I prepare a list and shop according to it.

建議: Your answer is quite short and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. For example: "Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because I cannot remember more than two or three tasks at once. So, making a list helps me stay organised."

範例: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because I cannot remember more than two or three tasks at once. So, making a list helps me stay organised.

建議: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words. For example: "I think some people do not like making lists because they can remember several tasks in their mind. Therefore, they feel making a list is unnecessary."

範例: I think some people do not like making lists because they can remember several tasks in their mind. Therefore, they feel making a list is unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak fluently and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example: "I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier and faster to type. Also, I can easily edit the list whenever needed."

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier and faster to type. Also, I can easily edit the list whenever needed.

× I don't remember two more than 8 items.

✓ I don't remember more than 8 items.

The phrase 'two more than 8 items' is incorrect because 'two' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct expression is 'more than 8 items' to indicate quantity beyond eight.

× That's why I. Make a list and. I shop according delist.

✓ That's why I make a list and shop according to the list.

The original sentence has incorrect punctuation and missing words, causing sentence fragments. Correcting it to a complete sentence with proper conjunction and preposition improves clarity.

× Yeah, sometime I make a list for my work becauses.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list for my work because.

The word 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× As I say, I don't remember more than two three work at at once, and that's why I make a list and. Yeah.

✓ As I said, I don't remember more than two or three tasks at once, and that's why I make a list.

The sentence has repetition ('at at'), missing conjunction ('or'), and incomplete ending. Correcting these improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I think some people don't make a list becauses they can remember more than three to more than three task on her mind and his mind and that's why I think they don't make any list of and.

✓ I think some people don't make a list because they can remember more than three tasks in their mind, and that's why I think they don't make any list.

The sentence has pluralization errors ('task' should be 'tasks'), repeated phrases, and incorrect pronouns ('her' and 'his' mixed). Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it is it is easier to type and it is a. And can be faster according to, right?

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to type and can be faster, right?

The phrase 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. Also, 'according to' is incorrectly used and unnecessary here. Removing it and fixing sentence fragments improves correctness.