列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'if I found something interesting a bit I actually bite.' Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to go to stores and buy what I need spontaneously. However, if I see something interesting, I might decide to buy it as well.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and irrelevant words. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Keep your answer coherent and logical, avoiding unrelated phrases.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list for my work. I prefer to keep track of my tasks mentally, but sometimes I find it hard to remember everything.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: As far as I'm concerned, some people don't like making lists because they feel pressured when they can't complete all the tasks. This can cause them to feel stressed and overwhelmed.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

範例: If I had to choose, I would prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list whether I'm shopping or working.

× if I found something interesting a bit I actually bite

✓ if I find something a bit interesting, I actually buy it

The sentence incorrectly uses 'found' (past tense) and 'bite' instead of 'find' (present tense) and 'buy'. Since the context is about current habits, present tense verbs should be used. Also, 'bite' is a wrong word choice; the correct verb is 'buy'.

× Eat Reality Paints Fortune Valley

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems to be a mistake; it should be omitted or clarified)

The sentence 'Eat Reality Paints Fortune Valley' does not form a coherent or grammatically correct sentence. It appears to be a nonsensical phrase and should be omitted or clarified for meaning.

× And when I do make glish for work. I don't know.

✓ And when I do make a list for work, I don't know.

The phrase 'make glish' is incorrect and likely a typo or mispronunciation. The intended phrase is probably 'make a list'. Also, the sentence was split incorrectly; it should be combined for clarity.

× I think people doesn't make list as it feels sometimes that they cannot fulfill their work

✓ I think people don't make lists because sometimes it feels that they cannot fulfill their work

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number. The conjunction 'as' is better replaced with 'because' for clarity.

× and they might feel a little. They may feel a little you stress.

✓ and they might feel a little stressed. They may feel a little stressed.

The phrase 'you stress' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'stressed' to describe the feeling. Also, the sentence is fragmented and should be completed properly.

× I carry my phone leave like everywhere like when going outdoors like shopping or in work.

✓ I carry my phone everywhere, like when going outdoors, shopping, or at work.

The phrase 'carry my phone leave like everywhere' is incorrect. 'Leave' is unnecessary and 'like' is overused. The preposition 'at work' is more appropriate than 'in work'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Before I had to choose, I will say I prefer to make a list on my phone

✓ If I had to choose before, I would say I prefer to make a list on my phone

The original sentence mixes past and future tenses incorrectly. 'Before I had to choose' is awkward; 'If I had to choose before' is better. Also, 'I will say' should be 'I would say' to match the conditional mood.