列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you make a list.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what I already have at home. This helps me avoid buying duplicates and saves money.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have important tasks. It works well because it helps me stay organized and handle difficult situations effectively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. They prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing them down.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid filler sounds and ensure your vocabulary fits the context.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I cannot lose the list. Also, I can access it anytime and anywhere easily.

× Definitely, sometimes I forget that things which I have two broad, so I always make sure to make a list whenever I go. For shopping.

✓ Definitely, sometimes I forget that things which I have two of, so I always make sure to make a list whenever I go shopping.

The phrase 'two broad' is incorrect; it should be 'two of' to indicate quantity. Also, 'for shopping' is better expressed as 'go shopping' to fit natural English usage.

× Definitely, sometimes I forget that things which I have two broad, so I always make sure to make a list whenever I go. For shopping.

✓ Definitely, sometimes I forget that things which I have two of, so I always make sure to make a list whenever I go shopping.

The preposition 'for' before 'shopping' is unnecessary here; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'for'.

× Is it work? Definitely.

✓ Does it work? Definitely.

The question 'Is it work?' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb here. The correct auxiliary verb for present simple questions with 'it' is 'does', so it should be 'Does it work?'.

× I make a list or whenever I have some important works and Deborah Ann yes, it works becauses it helps me to overcome any situation, any critical situation happening.

✓ I make a list whenever I have some important work and yes, it works because it helps me to overcome any situation, any critical situation happening.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' as an uncountable noun should be used. Also, 'or' is unnecessary and 'Deborah Ann' seems to be a mishearing or error and is removed for clarity.

× I make a list or whenever I have some important works and Deborah Ann yes, it works becauses it helps me to overcome any situation, any critical situation happening.

✓ I make a list whenever I have some important work and yes, it works because it helps me to overcome any situation, any critical situation happening.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used; it should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Well, I think that uh, some people do not like to make list becauses becauses it made that they remember the things which they need to be do or more hour.

✓ Well, I think that some people do not like to make lists because it reminds them of the things they need to do or more.

The repeated 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'made that they remember' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'reminds them'. 'Need to be do' should be 'need to do'. 'More hour' is unclear and omitted for clarity.

× Well, I think that uh, some people do not like to make list becauses becauses it made that they remember the things which they need to be do or more hour.

✓ Well, I think that some people do not like to make lists because it reminds them of the things they need to do or more.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of general preference.

× They did not like to such a kind of useless things on the list.

✓ They do not like such kinds of useless things on the list.

The phrase 'did not like to such a kind' is incorrect; it should be 'do not like such kinds'. Also, 'things' is plural, so 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' to agree.

× They did not like to such a kind of useless things on the list.

✓ They do not like such kinds of useless things on the list.

The past tense 'did not like' is inconsistent with the present general statement; it should be present tense 'do not like'.

× Well, with the invention of technology, making list on phone is definitely. Oh *** **** paper, because sometimes we lossed that paper but which things we written on phone cannot be lost and it is easily to assess everywhere.

✓ Well, with the invention of technology, making lists on the phone is definitely better than on paper, because sometimes we lose that paper but the things we write on the phone cannot be lost and it is easy to access everywhere.

The preposition 'on phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'Lossed' is incorrect past tense; correct is 'lose'. 'Which things we written' should be 'the things we write'. 'Easily to assess' should be 'easy to access'.