列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and finish with a supporting detail.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to avoid impulsive buying and to stick to my budget. This way, I don't forget anything important, and it helps me shop more efficiently.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to combine sentences for better flow. Also, be careful with verb tenses and phrasing to sound more natural.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. Additionally, I set reminders on my phone to keep me on track and meet deadlines, which makes my work life much easier.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'spontaneous season' and replace them with clearer terms.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything. Also, they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to spend time preparing lists before starting their tasks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing words and grammar errors. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why, using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on making your point concise and coherent.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better. Also, paper lists are more convenient for me than using my phone.

× Yes, Al, please try to make a list on to avoid impulsive buying and to be in but my budget.

✓ Yes, Al, please try to make a list to avoid impulsive buying and to stay within my budget.

The phrase 'make a list on to avoid' is incorrect. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary and 'to be in but my budget' is incorrect; it should be 'stay within my budget'. The verb 'stay' is used here to indicate remaining inside a limit, and 'within' is the correct preposition.

× Yes, Al, please try to make a list on to avoid impulsive buying and to be in but my budget.

✓ Yes, Al, please try to make a list to avoid impulsive buying and to stay within my budget.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used after 'make a list'. The correct phrase is 'make a list to avoid...' without 'on'. Also, 'in but my budget' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'within' to indicate staying inside a limit.

× So I don't expect much and and I will not forget anything that I need to buy.

✓ So I don't expect much, and I will not forget anything that I need to buy.

There is a repeated conjunction 'and and' which is a sentence structure error. Removing the duplicate 'and' improves clarity and correctness.

× And it is even easier. To remember what I need.

✓ And it is even easier to remember what I need.

The sentence is split incorrectly. 'To remember what I need.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence for completeness.

× Yeah, I was trying to make a list for my work.

✓ Yeah, I try to make a list for my work.

The past continuous 'was trying' suggests an action in progress in the past, but the context implies a habitual action, so the simple present 'try' is more appropriate.

× And I usually keep the notes and put reminders on my phone which helps me to keep me on track and on time.

✓ And I usually keep notes and put reminders on my phone which help me to stay on track and on time.

'The notes' is incorrect because it refers to notes in general; 'keep notes' is correct. Also, 'helps me to keep me' is redundant; 'help me to stay' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think they feel like they can remember everything and they want to make the spontaneous season.

✓ I think they feel like they can remember everything and want to be spontaneous.

'Make the spontaneous season' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'want to be spontaneous'. Also, 'and they want' can be simplified to 'and want' for smoother flow.

× Might be they don't want to spend their time in making a list instead of, they just want to start their work without wasting the time.

✓ Maybe they don't want to spend their time making a list; instead, they just want to start their work without wasting time.

'Might be' is incorrect here; 'Maybe' is the correct adverb. 'Spend their time in making' should be 'spend their time making' without 'in'. Also, 'instead of,' is incorrectly used; a semicolon or period is better. 'Wasting the time' should be 'wasting time' without 'the'.

× I prefer to make a list on pendant on paper because it is more convenient and I can easily remember when I write it down by myself by my hand because it's easy to remember an. Home.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is more convenient and I can easily remember when I write it down by hand because it's easy to remember at home.

'On pendant on paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is correct. 'By myself by my hand' is redundant; 'by hand' suffices. 'An. Home' is incorrect; it should be 'at home'.