列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding filler words like 'like' and 'sometimes'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, so I only purchase what is actually needed at home.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons why making lists helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work to stay organized. This way, I avoid confusion and can prepare tasks in advance, which helps me complete everything on time.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, and support it with examples or explanations using linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to rely on their memory to prepare things when needed.

建議: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain why you prefer using your phone for lists.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. This way, I don't have to worry about losing paper lists, and I can easily access my list anytime I need it.

× I like to make a list when I show go for shopping because sometimes like it's easy for me to recognize things like what in my mind like sometimes like it's also helps to reduce and necessary purchase.

✓ I like to make a list when I go shopping because sometimes it's easy for me to recognize things in my mind. Sometimes it also helps to reduce unnecessary purchases.

The phrase 'show go for shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be used without 'show'. Also, 'reduce and necessary purchase' is incorrect; it should be 'reduce unnecessary purchases'. The sentence was also fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Like I only show up those things which I need actually in my house.

✓ I only buy those things which I actually need in my house.

The phrase 'show up those things' is incorrect; 'show up' is not appropriate here. Also, 'things which I need actually in my house' is awkward; 'actually' should come before 'need'. The verb 'buy' fits better in this context.

× Like I plan something like some things in before like.

✓ I plan some things in advance.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Plan something like some things in before like' is not grammatically correct. Simplifying to 'I plan some things in advance' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× For so that I didn't get confused at the time and I'm prepared things in advance and it helps me too.

✓ So that I don't get confused and I prepare things in advance, which helps me too.

The phrase 'I didn't get confused' should be in present tense 'I don't get confused' to match the habitual action. Also, 'I'm prepared things' is incorrect; it should be 'I prepare things'. The sentence structure was also improved for clarity.

× They can prepare things on time like there may be. Foster Store.

✓ They can prepare things on time, like there may be a store nearby.

The phrase 'there may be. Foster Store' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. It was corrected to 'there may be a store nearby' to make sense. Also, a comma was added for clarity.

× I love to make list on my phone because I can log if I'll make a list on paper, I can lost my paper anywhere, but if I'll make a list on my phone, it's like easy for me because phone is with me every with every time I can take my phone with me and then I find anything on my phone that what I'm loo.

✓ I love to make lists on my phone because I can log them. If I make a list on paper, I can lose it anywhere, but if I make a list on my phone, it's easier for me because my phone is with me all the time. I can take my phone with me and find anything on it that I'm looking for.

Several preposition errors: 'make list on my phone' should be 'make lists on my phone'; 'I can lost my paper' should be 'I can lose my paper'; 'phone is with me every with every time' corrected to 'my phone is with me all the time'. Also, sentence fragments were corrected and clarified.