列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy, especially groceries and household items.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many mistakes. Focus on answering the question clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how making lists helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. It helps me save time and manage my tasks properly, so I can finish my work efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with specific examples. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary or time-consuming. For example, my mom always makes lists to remember things, but others prefer to rely on memory.

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my iPhone because it saves time and is easy to use. Also, I don't need to carry a pen or paper, which is very convenient for me.

× Yes, I make a list when I will when I go to SOAP.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop.

The phrase 'when I will when I go' is incorrect because 'will' is not used in time clauses introduced by 'when'. The correct form is the present tense 'when I go'. Also, 'SOAP' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'shop'.

× Like. I like when are you boy Grocery grocery.

✓ I like going to the grocery store.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence uses a proper structure and vocabulary to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I like. Life, visitors, food and arise.

✓ I like life, visitors, food, and rice.

The word 'arise' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'rice'. Also, the sentence fragments need to be combined into a proper list.

× Yes, I always make a mistake for burger like it is help help.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for buying groceries because it helps me.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors. 'Make a mistake for burger' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'make a list for buying groceries'. Also, 'help help' is redundant and incorrect.

× Me for saving time and menaced my worker and a proper time and it's helped me.

✓ It helps me save time and manage my work properly.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs. 'Me for saving time' is incorrect; the subject 'it' should be used. 'Menaced my worker' is likely a mispronunciation of 'manage my work'. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and verb forms.

× Yes some people I could make a list for examples my mom always make a list even even say go go to market and see the same make a list to recall the things that it save.

✓ Yes, some people make lists. For example, my mom always makes a list even when she goes to the market to remember things and save time.

The original sentence has pronoun misuse and is fragmented. 'I could make a list for examples' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns, verb forms, and sentence structure.

× my mom always make a list

✓ my mom always makes a list

In the present tense, third person singular subjects require verbs ending with 's' or 'es'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with 'my mom'.

× I prefer to make a list on my iPhone notes because it is it is time saving for me and it is. Is little understand to me and I I do not need a pen or papers becauses.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my iPhone notes because it saves me time and is easy to understand, and I do not need a pen or paper.

The original sentence has repeated words, incorrect pronouns, and pluralization errors. 'It is it is' is redundant. 'Is little understand to me' is incorrect; 'is easy to understand' is appropriate. 'Papers' should be singular 'paper' when referring to writing material in general.