列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating the same idea and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from overspending. For example, last week I stuck to my list and saved money by not buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear statement answering the question, then explain your reason with linking words like 'because'. Avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer natural and concise.

範例: No, I don't make lists for work because I can remember all my tasks easily. This helps me stay organised without needing to write things down.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid contradictory statements and keep your answer natural and relevant.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally. However, others find lists helpful to stay organised and avoid forgetting tasks.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear preference with reasons, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Make sure your sentences are complete and your ideas flow logically.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. This way, I can check my list anytime and avoid forgetting important things.

× Definitely win.

✓ Definitely, I win.

The original sentence 'Definitely win.' lacks a subject and a proper verb form. Adding 'I' as the subject and using the base verb 'win' in present tense makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Firstly I prepared a list of what I need and it helps.

✓ Firstly, I prepare a list of what I need and it helps.

The sentence mixes past tense 'prepared' with present tense 'need' and 'helps'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'prepare' is appropriate to maintain consistency.

× It helps too.

✓ It helps too.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved for clarity by combining with the previous sentence. However, as per instructions, only grammar mistakes listed are corrected.

× Not too much spending on things.

✓ I don't spend too much on things.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I don't spend' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Definitely not, because in the work I remember all the things about my work, so that is why I don't need you to make a list of.

✓ Definitely not, because at work I remember all the things about my work, so that is why I don't need to make a list.

The phrase 'in the work' is incorrect; 'at work' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'I don't need you to make a list of' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't need to make a list.' The pronoun 'you' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× In the contemporary era, some people can do not.

✓ In the contemporary era, some people cannot.

The phrase 'can do not' is incorrect. The correct negative form of 'can' is 'cannot' or 'can't'. Also, 'in the contemporary era' is acceptable but could be simplified.

× Remember all the things.

✓ They remember all the things.

The original sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'They' clarifies who is performing the action.

× So that is why they write it on there.

✓ So that is why they write it down there.

The word 'there' is incorrectly used as a pronoun. The phrase 'write it down there' is the correct expression meaning to record something on paper.

× Paper to remember it.

✓ On paper to remember it.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a verb or preposition. Adding 'On' clarifies that the writing is done on paper to remember things.

× I like to prepare list on my mobile phone because the mobile phone is very convenient to carry because it.

✓ I like to prepare a list on my mobile phone because the mobile phone is very convenient to carry.

The word 'list' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'because it.' which is incomplete and should be removed.

× Mobile phone always with me but people can last anywhere if.

✓ My mobile phone is always with me, but people can be anywhere.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'My' and 'is' completes the sentence. The phrase 'people can last anywhere if' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'people can be anywhere' is a clearer expression.