列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items."

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and avoid forgetting anything while shopping.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps you prioritize tasks.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember all my tasks. I usually arrange them by priority, so the most important tasks come first and the less important ones come last.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid repetition and improve grammar for better clarity.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they can remember things quickly. However, others, like me, find lists helpful because we have difficulty memorizing tasks.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words to compare your preferences and explain why you choose one method over the other.

範例: I use both paper and my phone for making lists. For long lists, I prefer paper because it's easier to see everything, but for short lists, I usually use my phone for convenience.

× Yes, of course I do have a habit of making list when I'm going shop.

✓ Yes, of course I do have a habit of making lists when I'm going shopping.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general habit of making more than one list. Also, 'going shop' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping' to use the correct verb form after 'going'.

× Going for shopping, It's help us to remember the important things while shopping.

✓ Going shopping helps us to remember the important things while shopping.

The phrase 'Going for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'Going shopping'. Also, 'It's help' should be 'It helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Going shopping'.

× So I like to do a list before that.

✓ So I like to make a list before that.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list'.

× It helped me to me remember all the task I have to do and I have to include the first one.

✓ It helps me to remember all the tasks I have to do and I have to include the first one.

The verb 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the present habit. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks.

× More important task must first one and the last important ask us last the last one.

✓ More important tasks must be first, and the least important tasks last.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to refer to multiple tasks. 'Ask us' is incorrect and should be 'tasks'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct plural usage.

× This help me to do that as a spirits priority.

✓ This helps me to do that as a spirit of priority.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Spirits priority' is incorrect; it should be 'spirit of priority' to express the intended meaning.

× Maybe they can memorize settings very fastly that kind of people no need the help of a list for peoples are really do have a a problem of memorizing that that person only needed the usage of a list.

✓ Maybe they can memorize things very fast; that kind of people do not need the help of a list. People who really have a problem with memorizing are the ones who need to use a list.

'Settings' is incorrect; it should be 'things'. 'Fastly' is not a word; use 'fast'. 'Peoples' is incorrect; use 'people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and noun usage.

× For example, I'm a person, I do have a problem with the memorizing, that's why I depends on the list.

✓ For example, I am a person who has a problem with memorizing; that's why I depend on the list.

'Depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'The memorizing' is incorrect; it should be 'memorizing' without 'the'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× I use both whenever I go outside for a vinader did long list, I like to prefer paper when I need to make a short list.

✓ I use both. Whenever I go outside for a longer list, I prefer paper; when I need to make a short list, I prefer my mobile phone.

The phrase 'for a vinader did long list' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'for a longer list'. 'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone is sufficient. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I just want to prefer mobile phone instead of paper.

✓ I just prefer to use my mobile phone instead of paper.

'Want to prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer to use' is the correct expression. Also, 'mobile phone' should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'my' for clarity.