列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的好处，但语言不够流畅，有语法错误和不完整的句子。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，避免断句和拼写错误。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay within my budget and saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和断句问题，影响表达的连贯性。建议练习使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it really helps me stay organized. For example, last week I created a checklist for my study tasks, which reminded me of what to do now and what to do next.

建議: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但可以使用更多连接词和具体例子来丰富内容。建议增加细节和连接词，使回答更自然。

範例: Some people think making lists wastes time because they prefer to be flexible and change their plans according to the situation, which helps them adapt better.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子并注意词汇搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better and motivates me to complete tasks on time.

× And it also saved.

✓ And it also saves.

这里的句子描述的是现在的习惯行为，应该使用一般现在时。原句使用了过去时'saved'，不符合语境。建议使用'saves'来表达经常发生的动作。

× It helps me stay within my budget and avoid imposed by in.

✓ It helps me stay within my budget and avoid overspending.

原句中'avoid imposed by in'结构不正确，可能是想表达避免超出预算。应使用'avoid overspending'来表达避免超支。

× Last week I make a checklist for my study which.

✓ Last week I made a checklist for my study which.

描述过去发生的动作，应该使用过去时'made'，而不是现在时'make'。

× Helps me. Remind me? Of what I should do now and what I should do next.

✓ It helps remind me of what I should do now and what I should do next.

原句断句不当，导致句子不完整且含糊。应合并为完整句子，保持语义连贯。

× It will once again deep in my impression.

✓ It will once again deepen my impression.

'deep'是形容词，不能直接用作动词。应使用动词'deepen'，且'deep in my impression'结构不正确，正确表达为'deepen my impression'。

× And it exactly urges me too. Get down to it. On time.

✓ And it exactly urges me to get down to it on time.

原句断句不当，'too'应为'to'，且句子应连贯表达完整意思。建议合并为一句完整句子。