列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your sentences concise and relevant. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, which saved me time and prevented me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on forming complete, coherent sentences and use linking words to explain how making lists helps your work. Be specific about the benefits and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget any tasks. This method makes my day more productive and saves me time by prioritising important activities.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague or incorrect phrases.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle. They might feel that lists restrict their freedom and make their day too structured.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to organise your ideas. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to focus when I write things down by hand. Every morning, I write my tasks for the day, which helps me stay organised and manage my time effectively.

× Well, yes, I usually do make a list while shopping 'cause it will make it easier for me to choose.

✓ Well, yes, I usually make a list while shopping because it makes it easier for me to choose.

The phrase 'do make' is unnecessary here; simple present tense 'make' is sufficient. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formality, and 'will make' should be 'makes' to match the habitual action in present tense.

× What I need to stop while? We go to stopping.

✓ I know what I need to stop for while shopping. We go shopping.

The original sentences are unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning seems to be about knowing what to stop for while shopping. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× And it made me very productive and it helps me a lot.

✓ And it makes me very productive and helps me a lot.

The verb 'made' is past tense, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'makes' is appropriate. Also, 'helps' should be parallel with 'makes'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. You make my day productive and to ensure I don't forward anything to do.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It makes my day productive and ensures I don't forget anything to do.

'You make' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes' referring to the list. 'To ensure' should be 'ensures' to match the subject. 'Forward' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'forget'.

× Throughout the day and it will help me. It will help my time and it'll save my. Save my.

✓ Throughout the day, it helps me. It helps me manage my time and saves it.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction provides complete sentences with clear meaning and proper structure.

× Well, in my opinion, I think that most people don't like to make a list because they don't want to productive and they don't want to change their lifestyle as making a list make us more productive an insert that we are.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I think that most people don't like to make a list because they don't want to be productive and they don't want to change their lifestyle, as making a list makes us more productive and ensures that we are...

'Don't want to productive' is incorrect; it should be 'don't want to be productive'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'making a list'. 'Insert' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'ensure'.

× We do not forgive our tasks throughout the day.

✓ We do not forget our tasks throughout the day.

The word 'forgive' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'forget'. The sentence structure is otherwise correct.

× Will I prefer making a list on a paper because after I wake up I.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because after I wake up, I...

'Will I prefer' is incorrect; simple present 'I prefer' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper'.

× 1st I get my pen and paper and write my list to do.

✓ First, I get my pen and paper and write my to-do list.

'1st' should be written as 'First' for formality. 'Write my list to do' is awkward; 'write my to-do list' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× What I need to do throughout my day to be more productive at the first in the morning and I will do echoed into that list so it will not answer my time.

✓ I write down what I need to do throughout my day to be more productive first thing in the morning, and I follow that list so it will not waste my time.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure and word choice ('echoed' to 'follow', 'answer my time' to 'waste my time').