列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say 'It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items.'

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items. For example, when I go to the grocery store with a list, I save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Also, complete your sentences fully. For example, explain why unexpected tasks disrupt your plans.

範例: I usually don't make a list for my work because unexpected tasks from my boss often disrupt my plans. Therefore, making a list is not very effective for me. However, sometimes I do make a list to organize my tasks when possible.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive, and others feel it adds unnecessary pressure.'

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to shop more freely. Additionally, some feel that lists add unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly reminding them of tasks.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to carry and I don't forget it like paper.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is easy to carry anywhere. Sometimes I forget to bring paper lists or leave them behind, so using my phone is more convenient.

× It help me to stay organized and ensure that I forget any important item.

✓ It helps me to stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important item.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'helps' instead of 'help'. Also, 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject. Additionally, 'forget' should be negated as 'don't forget' to convey the intended meaning.

× For example when I show up groceries having all list saving me time and prevent me from buying unnecessary things.

✓ For example, when I show up for groceries with the list, it saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'Show up groceries having all list' is incorrect; it should be 'show up for groceries with the list'. Also, verbs 'saving' and 'prevent' need to be corrected to 'saves' and 'prevents' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× In the shopping session.

✓ During the shopping session.

The phrase 'In the shopping session' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'During the shopping session' to indicate the time frame properly.

× there are so many unexpected work come from the boss which which disturb all that list and with rest of all the planning of work.

✓ there is so much unexpected work coming from the boss which disturbs the list and the rest of the work planning.

'Work' is an uncountable noun, so 'there are' should be 'there is' and 'many' should be 'much'. 'Come' should be 'coming' to indicate ongoing action. 'Which which' is a repetition error. 'Disturb' should be 'disturbs' to agree with singular 'work'. The phrase 'all that list and with rest of all the planning of work' is awkward and corrected to 'the list and the rest of the work planning'.

× So that's why I don't make list usually for the work.

✓ So that's why I usually don't make a list for work.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the verb 'don't make' for correct word order. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is a countable noun.

× But sometimes I used to make a.

✓ But sometimes I used to make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and should end with 'list' to complete the thought.

× Some people dislike about making less becauses the IT find it restrictive about the shopping session and they prefer to shop an organized way.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive during the shopping session and prefer to shop in an unorganized way.

'Dislike about' is incorrect; it should be 'dislike making lists'. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'The IT' is incorrect; it should be 'they'. 'Restrictive about' should be 'restrictive during'. 'Shop an organized way' should be 'shop in an unorganized way' or 'shop without organization' to convey the intended meaning.

× And some may feel that list add unnecessary pressure or stress by continuing constantly.

✓ And some may feel that lists add unnecessary pressure or stress by continuing constantly.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the plural verb 'add'. The phrase 'by continuing constantly' is awkward but retained as it is not a grammar problem listed.

× If I go for the list, I want to prefer it on my mobile phone 'cause it's easy to carry anywhere.

✓ If I make a list, I prefer to keep it on my mobile phone because it's easy to carry anywhere.

'Go for the list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'Want to prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone suffices. 'Prefer it on my mobile phone' should be 'prefer to keep it on my mobile phone'. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is better.

× Sometimes I forget to carry paper or leave somewhere.

✓ Sometimes I forget to carry paper or leave it somewhere.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'leave' to clarify what is left somewhere.

× So I would refer to. I would prefer to make a list in my phone in my notes session it.

✓ So I would refer to it. I prefer to make a list on my phone in my notes app.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Refer to' needs an object 'it'. 'Make a list in my phone in my notes session it' is awkward; corrected to 'make a list on my phone in my notes app' for clarity and correctness.