列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember what groceries I need. This helps me shop quickly and efficiently.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，表达更准确。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my coursework and documents. It helps me keep track of my tasks and finish them before the deadline.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有重复，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility in planning their schedule.

建議: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句和重复。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because the apps are convenient. I can check and add tasks anytime easily.

× Actually, I don't need a list when I go shopping yet because I know the situation of old groceries that I have to purchase so I always can find in a quickly and accurately.

✓ Actually, I don't need a list when I go shopping yet because I know the situation of old groceries that I have to purchase so I can always find them quickly and accurately.

这里缺少了复数形式的宾语“them”，导致句子不完整。应使用复数代词指代前文提到的“old groceries”，并且副词顺序应调整为“can always find them quickly and accurately”。

× Oh yes, I will make A to do list for older courseworks an documents that I have to finish before the deadline and I think it is very useful for me because I can uncheck that I and finish them in time.

✓ Oh yes, I will make a to-do list for older courseworks and documents that I have to finish before the deadline and I think it is very useful for me because I can check off what I have done and finish them in time.

“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”，且“courseworks”通常不可数，改为“coursework”更合适。句中“uncheck that I”表达不清，应改为“check off what I have done”表示完成任务的动作。

× In my opinion, the reason that people don't like to make a list is because that they think making a list will restrict their actions to to arrange more flexible schedule.

✓ In my opinion, the reason that people don't like to make a list is because they think making a list will restrict their actions and prevent them from arranging a more flexible schedule.

“because that”用法错误，应为“because”。“to to arrange”重复，应删除一个“to”。句子结构不完整，需补充“and prevent them from”使句意完整。

× Now I prefer to make a list on my phone because the application is very convenient for me to check every time an oh so I can add the T at the. Things that I have to finished on. Every time.

✓ Now I prefer to make a list on my phone because the application is very convenient for me to check every time, and I can add the things that I have to finish at any time.

句中“an oh so I can add the T at the.”不通顺，应改为“and I can add the things”。“have to finished on”时态和介词错误，应为“have to finish at any time”。句子需要调整使其通顺完整。