列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하며, 구체적인 내용을 포함시키는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 쇼핑 리스트를 만드는 이유와 방법을 명확히 설명하세요.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. Before going to the store, I check my refrigerator to see what items I need to buy. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary things and saves time.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 리스트를 만드는 이유와 효과를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks by priority and ensures I don't forget important duties.

建議: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 왜 사람들이 리스트 작성하는 것을 싫어하는지에 대해 명확하고 구체적인 이유를 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to remember tasks mentally. Sometimes, they think lists are unnecessary or restrictive.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 완성되지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 상황에 따라 선호하는 리스트 작성 방법을 명확히 설명하고, 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: It depends on the situation. When I go grocery shopping, I use my phone to make a list. But for work or homework, I prefer writing a paper list because I can easily check and erase tasks when I finish them.

× I look my refrigerator and check it.

✓ I look at my refrigerator and check it.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when indicating the object being observed. The original sentence is missing the preposition, which is necessary for correct grammar.

× Anne Watts, what I need.

✓ And what I need.

The phrase 'Anne Watts' is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is likely 'And what I need.' which correctly connects the sentence.

× I figured it out with the least.

✓ I figured it out with the list.

The word 'least' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error affecting sentence meaning and structure.

× I make a lease, I may go.

✓ I make a list, then I may go.

The word 'lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, the sentence lacks proper conjunction to connect the ideas clearly.

× Least that.

✓ List that.

'Least' is a mispronunciation or typo of 'list'. Correcting it clarifies the meaning.

× Why should I do?

✓ What should I do?

The question is incorrectly formed. The correct interrogative pronoun here is 'What' to ask about the action to be done.

× And re arranged by. Priority.

✓ And rearranged by priority.

The phrase is fragmented and incorrectly spaced. It should be a complete phrase indicating the list is organized by priority.

× I think because they know. About to.

✓ I think it's because they know about it.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It needs to be combined into a coherent sentence with proper subject and object.

× What do they have on day home?

✓ What they have at home that day?

The sentence is incorrectly structured and uses wrong prepositions. Correct structure and prepositions improve clarity.

× Actually not.

✓ Actually, they do not.

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. Adding subject and verb clarifies the meaning.

× There's some kind of misunderstand over.

✓ There's some kind of misunderstanding.

The phrase 'misunderstand over' is incorrect. The correct noun form is 'misunderstanding' without 'over'.

× Estimating. Hurt himself.

✓ They underestimate and hurt themselves.

The original phrases are fragments and unclear. Combining them into a complete sentence with correct pronouns and verbs improves clarity.

× Case by case when I go to the grocery I'm a least with my phone but when I do to do some work or homework I prefer paper list.

✓ It depends; when I go to the grocery store, I make a list with my phone, but when I do work or homework, I prefer a paper list.

The original sentence is run-on and contains errors like 'I'm a least' instead of 'I make a list'. Proper conjunctions and corrections improve readability.

× And when I do when I.

✓ And when I do, when I...

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs completion or removal for clarity.

× Don my work I check it an.

✓ When I done my work, I check it and...

The word 'Don' should be 'done'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper conjunctions.

× Check it at Erase them.

✓ Check it and erase them.

The phrase 'at Erase them' is incorrect. The correct conjunction is 'and' to connect the actions.