列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e boro sentence use korun, jate proshner uttor spostho hoy ebong boro sentence er maddhome proshner uttor dite paren. Apnar answer e kichu word gulo vul ache, jemon 'make it list' er bodole 'make a list' bola uchit. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because' er por spostho karon dite. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, apni boro sentence ebong spostho karon dite paren.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping easier.

建議: Apni proshner uttor e spostho topic sentence dite paren, tarpor supporting details dite paren. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'for example' kintu sentence gulo spostho ebong shothik bhabe gathan korun. Apnar uttor e kichu word gulo vul ache, jemon 'list are maintaining the time' er bodole 'lists help me manage my time' bola uchit. Apni sentence gulo ke aro natural ebong logical korte paren.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me work faster. For example, lists help me manage my time effectively and complete tasks quickly.

建議: Apni proshner uttor e spostho topic sentence dite paren. Apnar sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ebong structure e gathan korun. Linking words use korun jemon 'because', 'so' jate uttor logical hoy. Apni specific karon dite paren jemon 'some people find it difficult' ba 'some people think it is not useful'.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and believe it is not very useful.

建議: Apni proshner uttor e spostho topic sentence dite paren. Apnar sentence gulo ke shothik grammar ebong structure e gathan korun. Apni linking words use korun jemon 'because' jate uttor logical hoy. Apnar uttor e kichu obossoi spostho kora dorkar, jemon 'I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me'.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always in my pocket and I use my phone all the time.

× Yes, I make it list when I go to shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'make it list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is the correct expression. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form to indicate the activity. So, 'go shopping' is the proper form.

× Be 'cause. At least. Of marketing is very. Easy to shop.

✓ Because making a list is very easy when shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Be 'cause' should be 'Because'. 'At least of marketing' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or miswriting of 'making a list'. The sentence should be structured properly to convey the meaning clearly.

× Yes, I always list.

✓ Yes, I always make a list.

The verb 'list' is not commonly used alone as a verb meaning 'to make a list'. The correct phrase is 'make a list'. So, 'I always make a list' is the proper expression.

× I go to work 'cause this. Is working faster.

✓ I go to work because it helps me work faster.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'This is working faster' is incorrect; it should specify what 'this' refers to and how it helps. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves structure.

× For example, list are maintaining the time and. Is very fast work.

✓ For example, lists help in managing time and make work faster.

'List are' is incorrect because 'list' is singular and should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'are'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides proper subject-verb agreement and clearer meaning.

× Some people I think is making list a very. Useful, and it is very. Difficult.

✓ I think some people find making lists very useful but also very difficult.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words. 'Some people I think is making list a very useful' is incorrect. The correction rearranges the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think it's some people are. Don't. Like make list.

✓ So I think some people don't like making lists.

The sentence has unnecessary pronouns and incorrect verb forms. 'It's some people are' is incorrect. The correction removes unnecessary words and uses the correct verb form 'making lists'.

× I paper list from my phone 'cause it's always in my. Pocket and every time I use my phone but.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always in my pocket and I use my phone all the time.

'I paper list' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to make lists'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' when talking generally. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.