列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意主语一致性和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地说明做购物清单的原因。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items when I shop, so the list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: 回答语法混乱，表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子并清晰说明做工作清单的原因和效果，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks and manage my time effectively.

建議: 回答不连贯且表达不清晰，建议用完整句子表达观点，解释原因时使用连接词，使内容更具体和有逻辑。

範例: I find it hard to understand why some people dislike making lists. Maybe they feel pressured when they see the list, which makes them uncomfortable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确时态和完整句子，清楚表达偏好及原因，避免重复和断句不当。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing them down helps me remember better, while using my phone doesn't have the same effect.

× Yes of course I do as I often forget what you buy when I'm working the shop, so this will help me to buy all the things I need to do.

✓ Yes, of course I do as I often forget what I buy when I'm working in the shop, so this will help me to buy all the things I need.

句中使用了错误的人称代词“you”，应为“I”，且“working the shop”缺少介词，应为“working in the shop”。此外，“things I need to do”表达不准确，应为“things I need”。这是单复数和介词使用错误。

× Of course I do. I really needed list to work for it could help me. Directly. No how much job I need to do next and it often works and help me regulate the time.

✓ Of course I do. I really need a list to work because it can help me directly know how much work I need to do next, and it often works and helps me regulate the time.

“needed list”应为“need a list”，缺少冠词且时态错误；“No how much job”应为“know how much work”，单复数和拼写错误；“help me”应为“helps me”，主谓一致错误。

× Oh, it's really hard for me to understand it 'cause I really. Like making lists. Oh, maybe they think it will be pressure for them to see the list and let's them too.

✓ Oh, it's really hard for me to understand because I really like making lists. Oh, maybe they think it will be a pressure for them to see the list and stress them too.

“let's them”用词错误，应为“stress them”；“pressure”前缺少冠词“a”；句子断裂，需合并。这里涉及代词和词汇使用错误。

× I preferred you make a list so on paper 'cause when I writing the list I will. Remember what I need to do and if I write them on the phone I will. I can control my take control of.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write the list I will remember what I need to do, and if I write them on the phone, I can't take control of it.

“preferred”应为现在时“prefer”，时态错误；“when I writing”应为“when I write”，动词形式错误；“I can control my take control of”表达混乱，应为“can't take control of it”。