列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use simple present tense correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail using linking words.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I rely on my memory. Moreover, I find making a list boring and time-consuming.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work. It helps me remember important tasks and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about reasons why some people dislike making lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring. However, others find lists helpful. So, it depends on personal preference.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to show contrast and preference clearly.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper, but if I don't have paper and pen, I use my phone. It depends on the situation.

× No, I am not making any list usually be 'cause I believe and I rely on my memory and it is also a quick and the faster.

✓ No, I do not usually make any list because I believe and rely on my memory and it is also quick and faster.

The sentence incorrectly uses present continuous tense 'am not making' for a habitual action, which should be in simple present tense 'do not make'. Also, 'usually be' is incorrect; 'usually' should be placed before the verb and 'be' removed. 'The faster' is incorrect; 'faster' alone suffices as a comparative adjective.

× The making a list is very boring task for me.

✓ Making a list is a very boring task for me.

The phrase 'The making a list' is incorrect; 'Making a list' is the correct gerund phrase. Also, 'very boring task' needs an article 'a' before 'very boring task' to be grammatically correct.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a list of my work because if I forgot anything of my related to my work then it is easier for me to remember it.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list of my work because if I forget anything related to my work, then it is easier for me to remember it.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'forgot' in a conditional clause referring to present/future; it should be present tense 'forget'. Also, 'anything of my related to my work' is awkward; 'anything related to my work' is correct.

× Yes, some people don't like making a list because it is a boring for the some people and yeah it is helpful for the some people.

✓ Yes, some people don't like making lists because it is boring for some people and it is helpful for others.

The article 'a' before 'boring' is incorrect; 'boring' is an adjective here and does not need an article. 'The some people' is incorrect; 'some people' without 'the' is correct. Also, 'making a list' should be plural 'making lists' to generalize the activity.

× Never the same time.

✓ Not at the same time.

The phrase 'Never the same time' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct phrase is 'Not at the same time' to express that something does not happen simultaneously.

× I prefer to make list on the paper and on my phone also.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper and on my phone as well.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' to generalize the activity. 'On the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct idiomatic expression. 'Also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end for naturalness.

× When I have no paper and pen then I'll make a list in my phone and then sometimes I make my list on the paper also.

✓ When I have no paper and pen, I make a list on my phone, and sometimes I make my list on paper as well.

'In my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity and smoother flow.