列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and has grammatical errors. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized."

範例: I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

建議: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Use a complete sentence to directly answer the question and add supporting details with linking words. For example, "Yes, I make lists for my work on my phone because it helps me keep track of tasks efficiently."

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work on my phone because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important deadlines.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and difficult to plan their day."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time and they prefer to remember things spontaneously.

建議: Your answer is confusing and fragmented. Try to give a clear preference with reasons and use linking words. For example, "I prefer to make shopping lists on paper because it's easier to see, but for daily tasks, I use my phone for convenience."

範例: I prefer to write shopping lists on paper since it's simple to check items, but for daily planning, I use my phone because it's always with me.

× Related to me, I prefer to make list while every time when I go shopping.

✓ As for me, I prefer to make a list every time I go shopping.

The phrase 'Related to me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'As for me'. Also, 'make list' lacks the article 'a'. The phrase 'while every time when' is redundant; 'every time' alone suffices.

× Related to me, I prefer to make list while every time when I go shopping.

✓ As for me, I prefer to make a list every time I go shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I consider this method to be the most comfortable.

✓ I consider this method to be the most convenient.

While 'comfortable' is not incorrect, 'convenient' is more appropriate when referring to methods or ways of doing things.

× Frankly, I'd like to make a list for my work. However, I usually do it in my telephone.

✓ Frankly, I'd like to make a list for my work. However, I usually do it on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a device. Also, 'telephone' is better replaced with 'phone' in casual speech.

× In my humble opinion, numerous people refuz making lists due to the fact that.

✓ In my humble opinion, numerous people refuse making lists because.

The word 'refuz' is a misspelling of 'refuse'. Also, 'due to the fact that' is wordy; 'because' is more concise and appropriate here.

× They consider this methods.

✓ They consider these methods.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular and should be 'these' to agree with the plural noun 'methods'.

× They consider this methods. To be. One of the hardest method to plan their daily life.

✓ They consider these methods to be one of the hardest ways to plan their daily life.

The sentence is fragmented and has singular/plural mismatches. 'Method' should be plural 'ways' to match 'hardest' and the context.

× All in all it is it takes them a long time I think.

✓ All in all, I think it takes them a long time.

The original sentence is awkward and redundant. The corrected sentence has proper word order and clarity.

× Frankly, it depends if I make. At least for my. Shopping day I I prefer to make it. On the paper where as well? If I planning if I plan my? Daily, daily life I consider a telephone to be.

✓ Frankly, it depends. At least for my shopping day, I prefer to make it on paper. However, if I plan my daily life, I consider a phone to be better.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Pronouns and articles are misused. The correction provides clear, complete sentences with proper pronoun and article usage.