列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer ga tokidoki fukuzatsu de, bunshou no tsuzuki ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui bunshou ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I used to make a list when I went shopping because shopping without a list often led me to overspend and buy unnecessary items. Now, I always make a list to avoid this.' no you ni, bunshou o seikaku ni shite kudasai.

範例: I used to make a list when I went shopping because shopping without a list often led me to overspend and buy unnecessary items. Now, I always make a list to avoid this.

建議: Kotae ga tokidoki fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui tokoro ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui bunshou ni shite kudasai. Mata, 'linking words' o tsukatte, setsuzoku o yoku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I make a list early in the morning to keep track of my tasks and organize my day. This helps me to be more productive.' no you ni.

範例: I make a list early in the morning to keep track of my tasks and organize my day. This helps me to be more productive.

建議: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui bunshou ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete tasks every day.' no you ni, kantan de wakari yasui hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete tasks every day.

建議: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui tokoro ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui bunshou ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is accessible and convenient.' no you ni, setsuzoku shi, rikai shi yasui hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

範例: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is accessible and convenient.

× Back then I used to. Make list when I go shopping but then.

✓ Back then I used to make a list when I went shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Used to' should be followed directly by the base verb without a period. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'used to'. Combine into one complete sentence for clarity.

× Make list when I go shopping but then.

✓ Make a list when I go shopping but then.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× I learned from it the. Shopping without list leads me to overspending and buying things that I don't really need.

✓ I learned from it that shopping without a list leads me to overspending and buying things that I don't really need.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the conjunction 'that' to connect clauses. Also, 'list' needs the article 'a' before it. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammar.

× That's why whenever I go shopping.

✓ That's why whenever I go shopping, I make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause after 'whenever I go shopping'. Adding the main clause completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Early in the morning I make list of the things that I need to do in this day.

✓ Early in the morning I make a list of the things that I need to do in this day.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is grammatically incorrect.

× So that I have track so so that I contract. Come and organize the things that I need to do.

✓ So that I can keep track and organize the things that I need to do.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Have track' is incorrect; it should be 'keep track'. The phrase 'contract. Come' is nonsensical here and should be removed. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And as well as. In order for me to be more productive in my day.

✓ And also, it helps me to be more productive in my day.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a main verb. 'And as well as' is not used correctly here. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.

× I think. Be some people don't want to pressure them there themselves too.

✓ I think some people don't want to pressure themselves too much.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'them there themselves'. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves'. Also, 'too' should be 'too much' to express degree properly.

× To do some task and two. Reach and test. In every day.

✓ To do some tasks and to rest every day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words 'two. Reach and test'. It likely intended 'to do some tasks and to rest every day'. Correcting spelling and structure clarifies the meaning.

× I usually prefer using my phone. In doing in making list because it's very accessible.

✓ I usually prefer using my phone to make lists because it's very accessible.

The phrase 'in doing in making list' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' after 'prefer' when followed by a verb. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize the activity.

× And very convenient I can ease.

✓ And it's very convenient and easy to use.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I can ease' is incorrect. The correction provides a complete sentence expressing convenience and ease of use.