列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid repetition and incorrect word usage. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons why making a list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, without a list, I often forget important items, which wastes time. Therefore, making a list ensures I buy all my groceries efficiently.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and explain how your timetable helps you manage work, using linking words for coherence.

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work, but I create a timetable instead. This timetable helps me organise my tasks and manage my time effectively, so I can complete my work on schedule.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words to explain your ideas.

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and not follow a strict schedule. Additionally, they may find writing lists time-consuming or unnecessary for their lifestyle.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because we always carry it with us. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost or forgotten at home, phone lists are more convenient and reliable.

× Yes, I make list when I show because it may find.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it may help.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'show' is a typo for 'shop'. The phrase 'it may find' is unclear and likely intended as 'it may help'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I find difficult difficulty when I don't make the list.

✓ I find it difficult when I don't make the list.

The phrase 'difficult difficulty' is redundant and incorrect. 'Difficult' is an adjective and needs an object like 'it' to be grammatically correct. The corrected sentence uses 'find it difficult' which is the proper expression.

× Whenever I make a list, I get the proper citation of the things so that I can choose my grocery easily.

✓ Whenever I make a list, I get the proper selection of things so that I can choose my groceries easily.

The word 'citation' is incorrect here; 'selection' fits the context. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' without 'the'. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries' when referring to items to buy. These changes correct article use and word choice.

× Nope, basically we can't see a list.

✓ Nope, basically we don't use a list.

The phrase 'can't see a list' is unclear and likely incorrect. The intended meaning is probably 'don't use a list'. This correction addresses clarity and proper verb usage.

× I make a timetable for my work like how to arrange my work and went to do my work and yeah it helps me a lot to time management.

✓ I make a timetable for my work, like how to arrange my work and when to do it, and yeah, it helps me a lot with time management.

The phrase 'went to do my work' is incorrect; it should be 'when to do my work' to indicate scheduling. Also, 'helps me a lot to time management' should be 'helps me a lot with time management'. These corrections fix tense and preposition errors.

× Accordingly, they may be an independent to their actions.

✓ Accordingly, they may be independent in their actions.

The phrase 'an independent' is incorrect; 'independent' is an adjective and does not take 'an'. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'in their actions' is correct. This fixes pronoun and preposition usage.

× So that can be a reason.

✓ That can be a reason.

Starting a sentence with 'So that' here is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing 'So' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer making making list on phone because as nowadays if we have to keep our phone with us every time, so.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because nowadays we have to keep our phone with us all the time.

The phrase 'making making list' has a repeated word and 'list' should be plural 'lists'. 'As nowadays if' is awkward; 'because nowadays' is better. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.

× In some cases paper can be lost or can we can forget it at home, but our phone is always with us.

✓ In some cases, paper can be lost or we can forget it at home, but our phone is always with us.

The phrase 'can we can forget' is incorrect and redundant. Removing the extra 'can' corrects the sentence structure. Adding a comma after 'cases' improves readability.