列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. For example, instead of 'I usually go with whatever I like,' you could say 'I tend to choose items spontaneously based on my preferences.' Also, use linking words like 'however' to contrast your habits for clothes and groceries.

範例: It depends on the type of shopping I do. For clothes, I tend to choose items spontaneously based on my preferences. However, when it comes to groceries, I usually make a list to keep track and ensure I don't forget anything.

建議: Your response addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'unless and until.' Try to provide a more direct topic sentence and specific examples.

範例: I usually don't make a list for my work unless I have many tasks to complete. However, when the workload is heavy, I categorize my tasks to ensure I don't miss anything.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and formal. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and repetitive use of 'so.' Use linking words such as 'therefore' or 'as a result' to improve coherence. Also, try to provide a more general reason rather than focusing only on your friends.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult to follow them consistently. As a result, they feel disappointed and prefer to go with the flow instead.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more varied vocabulary and correct minor grammar errors. For example, instead of 'I am usually scared,' say 'I usually worry.' Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient and portable. I usually worry about losing paper lists, so I always note things down digitally.

× I don't really make a list on what I want.

✓ I don't really make a list of what I want.

The correct preposition to use with 'make a list' is 'of', not 'on'. 'Make a list of' is the standard phrase to indicate the items included in the list.

× I usually make a list so I keep a track of it and I don't forget anything out.

✓ I usually make a list so I keep track of it and I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'keep track of' does not require the article 'a'. Also, 'forget anything out' is incorrect; 'forget anything' suffices because 'forget' already implies omission.

× Unless and until there are a bunch of things to do, I usually don't make a list for my work habits.

✓ Unless there are a bunch of things to do, I usually don't make a list for my work habits.

'Unless and until' is redundant; 'unless' alone is sufficient to express the condition. Using both together is incorrect in this context.

× Otherwise, if there's a lot of work that I categorize it so I don't miss out on anything.

✓ Otherwise, if there's a lot of work, I categorize it so I don't miss out on anything.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper structure. The clause 'if there's a lot of work' should be followed by a comma and then the main clause 'I categorize it...'. The pronoun 'it' refers back to 'a lot of work' and should not be repeated unnecessarily.

× I've noticed a lot of my friends make lists but they were never able to follow them.

✓ I've noticed a lot of my friends make lists but they have never been able to follow them.

The present perfect tense 'have never been able' is appropriate here to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. Using simple past 'were' suggests a completed action in the past, which conflicts with the ongoing nature implied by 'I've noticed'.

× So I think it just makes them disappointed at the end of the day if they don't follow the list.

✓ So I think it just makes them disappointed at the end of the day when they don't follow the list.

The conjunction 'if' suggests a conditional situation, but here the speaker means a situation that actually happens, so 'when' is more appropriate to indicate time.

× So they end up not making any lists and follow, you know, go with the flow.

✓ So they end up not making any lists and just follow, you know, going with the flow.

The phrase 'go with the flow' needs to be in the gerund form 'going with the flow' to function properly as a noun phrase after 'follow'. Also, adding 'just' improves the naturalness of the sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very handy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very handy.

This sentence is correct as is. 'Make a list on my phone' is acceptable usage.

× I am usually scared that I would lose my paper somewhere on the way, so I always noted down on my phone.

✓ I am usually scared that I would lose my paper somewhere on the way, so I always note it down on my phone.

The verb tense should be present simple 'note' to match the habitual action. Also, 'noted down' is past tense and inconsistent with 'usually'. Adding 'it' clarifies the object being noted down.