列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and coherent by avoiding hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific about when you make lists.

範例: I sometimes make a list when I shop, especially if I need to buy many items that I might forget. However, if I only need a few things, I usually don't make a list because it's easier to remember them.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how making lists helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list in my room to remind myself of the tasks I need to accomplish. Since I work in the injury department of a hospital, making and reviewing lists helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Provide more specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are used to their tasks and can remember them easily. Also, they may think making a list wastes time since they prefer to do things immediately without planning.

建議: Make your answer more fluent and avoid hesitations. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to write my lists on paper rather than on my phone because paper is very handy. I can easily put it in my pocket and check it anytime, especially since we are not allowed to use phones while working.

× I just make a list if I need to buy a lot of things that I could not even remember those, but if it's not that very. Uh, many.

✓ I just make a list if I need to buy a lot of things that I could not even remember, but if it's not that many,

The phrase 'that I could not even remember those' is incorrect because 'those' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. Also, 'that very. Uh, many' is fragmented and incorrect; it should be 'that many' to correctly refer to a plural quantity. The correction removes 'those' and fixes the phrase to 'that many' to properly express plural quantity.

× I usually make a list in my room so that they could not forget the things that I needed to accomplish and then since I'm working in a injury department of the hospital, I need to make a list and sometimes review those.

✓ I usually make a list in my room so that I will not forget the things that I need to accomplish, and since I'm working in the injury department of the hospital, I need to make a list and sometimes review it.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to the speaker; it should be 'I' to match the subject. Also, 'could not forget' is incorrect in this context; 'will not forget' or 'do not forget' is appropriate. 'A injury department' should be 'the injury department' because it refers to a specific department. 'Review those' is vague; 'review it' refers back to the list correctly.

× since I'm working in a injury department of the hospital, I need to make a list and sometimes review those.

✓ since I'm working in the injury department of the hospital, I need to make a list and sometimes review it.

The article 'a' before 'injury department' is incorrect because 'injury department' is a specific place; it should be 'the'. This is related to article usage but also affects prepositional phrase correctness. The preposition 'in' is correct here.

× Because maybe they're getting used to the task or the things that they do, that's why they don't make a list anymore.

✓ Because maybe they are used to the tasks or the things that they do, that's why they don't make a list anymore.

The phrase 'they're getting used to' implies an ongoing process, but the intended meaning is that they are already accustomed. 'They are used to' is the correct expression. Also, 'the task' should be plural 'the tasks' to match 'things' and generalize the meaning.

× And for them it's just a waste of time to put things on the list while making them straight ahead.

✓ And for them, it's just a waste of time to put things on the list while making them directly.

The phrase 'making them straight ahead' is unclear and incorrect. 'Straight ahead' is an adverbial phrase that does not fit here. The intended meaning is likely 'doing them directly' or 'doing them immediately'. The correction uses 'directly' to clarify the meaning.

× I prefer to write it down on the paper rather than in phone.

✓ I prefer to write it down on paper rather than on my phone.

The phrase 'on the paper' is less natural than 'on paper' when referring to writing generally. Also, 'in phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to devices like phones. Additionally, 'my phone' is more natural to specify ownership.

× And because. Uhm, it's very handy, handy.

✓ Because it's very handy.

The sentence fragment 'And because. Uhm, it's very handy, handy.' is incorrect. 'And because' is a conjunction that should connect clauses, but here it stands alone. The filler 'Uhm' and repeated 'handy' are unnecessary. The correction forms a complete sentence without fillers or repetition.

× You can put it in your pocket and review the things that you have to do while phones. We could not use phones during working out.

✓ You can put it in your pocket and review the things that you have to do, while we cannot use phones during working out.

The phrase 'while phones.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected properly to the next sentence. Also, 'We could not use phones during working out' should be 'we cannot use phones during working out' to express present ability. The correction connects the ideas clearly and uses correct pronouns and modal verbs.